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there goes the missing nin arc
ok I guess still would liked to see your original plot play out
i think people are forgetting this has a harem tag you have to get there some how so I don't really get why are there so many people butt hurt about some yuri in a harem talking about trust and MC being cuck when we know at the end of this he's gonna have a HAREM
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Alright we get itHe's the definition of stoicism you can stop mentioning it
wait all of them I thought It was only hearing?
are there no guns in this version ?
why does he care for the children again?
I felt it like forced drama for character development that really doesn't feel like it
that's all you had to say at the beginning of her little outburst
my guy would it kill you to just tell what you did and why
that came out of no whereor did I skip some lines that I didn't see?
i gave it a shot man i really did, I appreciate a good slow start and even a slow pace story but this is very boring to read and its a Naruto fanfic they can be great silly stupid or even garbage but never thought i would think of one as boring, worst of all your grammar is pretty good compared to others that are on this place. MC is meh in a bad way not interested in him one bit after reading so far into the story i mean i know he gets to overcome his challenges but we know this Naruto and in the end it doesn't really mean much to me becuase we know whats gonna happen canon wise and it doesn't really matter in the long run.
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