Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

I honestly have no idea what happened to him in the park that got him wounded. It wasn't clear what happened. Did he get shot?

So the MC looks like a trap? And having random visits by God is immersion breaking and bad.

so the dudes got Raizels Hemomancy from Noblesse?

i just ignored this whole chapter

The grammar is horrible, I can't understand what's going on.

Sooooooo What just happened???

am I the one unable to understand or what?

this chapter was way too messy

Jesus Christ, your english skills suck.

I think he got a blood clot or something like I heard when there is too much pressure inside the head there are air bubbles and stuff and they explode anyways I think it is a blood clot but I don't thing my definition of a blood clot is accurate so...

When does the grammar improve???

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

sorry but I can't understand what is happening

what?

nice work and thx

honestly I have no idea what I just read. the English was all over the place . pauses and stops in places that are unnecessary. filled with nothing but short sentences

And it's a sword there's only 1 sword I know that is the lord's Ragnarok capable to create and control blood into range atk and shield barrier almost like a Noblesse but not too much.

I dont understand the whole novel at this point