This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant

This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant written by cloud9stories, it is on ff

This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant

This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant

This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant

This is a stolen story, the original is named meddling Giant by: cloud9stories

you expect us to read all your comments? on every chapters ? Because I don't see any answer to that in this thread .

why racist ?

the pronoums !!!!!

begin*

you should Bégon a new paragraph with each new dialogue

there is a lot of mistakes. Seem like you have a mad auto correct !

it is strange, Can t remember any mention of them before. Did the Uzumakis got killed this time too ?

it is stranglely well writen for smth with so many grammatical mistake.

Unless I m mistaking, the RoR IS on thé 7th floors

Great begining ! only critics I would have is the lack of background building for your mc. We somehow know he is from meteor city, but that it. Also his système ability is great and would have been enough as hospital main ability.

he is the only prisoner in the prison ?

ablette is called roach in english

normaly most spell don't affect troll. That why they are considered hard to kill

I love personnaly " the side character" thing. So boring to read when the mc hasard everything from the start. You already gave him a huge legacy !