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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

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Harry Potter: New World

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GnawingJackal
GnawingJackalLv5GnawingJackal

It's pretty rough. If this chapter was revised a few times and some detail was added about the MC's reactions and feelings to dying and being sent to an afterlife bureaucracy was ACTUALLY INCLUDED then it would be a nice premise. The part where the MC gets his golden finger because the frustrated god wants to cause problems for his co-workers in petty revenge is pretty funny. The story is currently too clumsy to be bothered with though.

2yr
Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

I'm so fkin confused and the Sentence Structure is annoying lol

3yr
98
the_fat_taoist
the_fat_taoistLv14the_fat_taoist

3yr
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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13ArtoriaPendragon_

3yr
67
Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

wtf was that? he died, got that, he went to a processing place got that, the rest... wtf?

3yr
60
EvergreenGaming
EvergreenGamingLv5EvergreenGaming

seem like a more realistic setting then karma dump or hero summons or apologetic/pity summons

3yr
47
seb3578
seb3578Lv13seb3578

3yr
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Invisiblevoice
InvisiblevoiceLv6Invisiblevoice

This stressed, overworked and so done with his job death god is such a mood.

3yr
27
Popi_11
Popi_11Lv3Popi_11

what happened?

3yr
18
Fhjbvdg
FhjbvdgLv5Fhjbvdg

what is this????

3yr
14
Hubert_de_Seze
Hubert_de_SezeLv1Hubert_de_Seze

"if i say iits hit to flies, then iits hit to flies!" 10/10 would recommend

3yr
13
zero777
zero777Lv3zero777

The ranting of this death god was excellently cringe. Thx for this moment

2yr
7
poof000
poof000Lv11poof000

I'll be honest, no clue what's going on but I will keep reading

3yr
7

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LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

3yr
5
Verdiante
VerdianteLv11Verdiante

This is really confusing.

2yr
4
moises_vahn
moises_vahnLv12moises_vahn

este idiota le echa la culpa a este otro idiota por lo que sucedió antes? y que mierda será su trabajo no?

3yr
4
Metalooney
MetalooneyLv13Metalooney

hard to read

3yr
3

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

2yr
2
Nikkazpokemon19
Nikkazpokemon19Lv1Nikkazpokemon19

Well, I am still in the first chapter and it looks good still interesting has the I-wanna-keep-reading-this vibe and your english is understandable so great job writing this

2yr
2
Yaoto
YaotoLv2Yaoto

yoooo finally i have found good HP fan-fic. and honestly his english is pretty good so i see no problem here. keep going man.

2yr
2
diego_garcia
diego_garciaLv3diego_garcia

2yr
2
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