-Eeeh, I think it would be better for him to have migrated to an orphan, it would be much easier, without plot, without boring family or any inconvenience
I realized why the wallpaper was Shikamaru.
I swear, if the author made him blind in one eye for any reason just because it makes him look 'cool', I'm going to drop this.
The formatting/grammar is really, really confusing. Specifically, the dialogue needs major editing. It's impossible to tell what's actually being said and to who.
Sigh, for 6 chapters I was hoping the author would create something original worth enjoying but like most of the others, they also thought it necessary to attempt a rewrite at a well established completed work of art.