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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Shinobi System!

Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerLv4Jokr_Avenger

-Eeeh, I think it would be better for him to have migrated to an orphan, it would be much easier, without plot, without boring family or any inconvenience

eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv3eccentricbeing18

I realized why the wallpaper was Shikamaru. I swear, if the author made him blind in one eye for any reason just because it makes him look 'cool', I'm going to drop this.

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15OukisLips

The formatting/grammar is really, really confusing. Specifically, the dialogue needs major editing. It's impossible to tell what's actually being said and to who.

NP_3228
NP_3228Lv5NP_3228

Any1 else skip the first 5 chapters?

Yesuh_Dmz
Yesuh_DmzLv2Yesuh_Dmz

No, I don't like Shikamaru as a MC so I leaf

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Harém: Tsunade Hinata Ino Mei Terumi Samui Karin Yugito Nii(Maybe) Konan Anko(Maybe) Shizune(Maybe) Hanabi Karui(Maybe) Mabui(Maybe) Temari(Maybe) Kurenai(Maybe) Pakura Kaguya

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

I just hope this shikamaru is not as lazy lol

AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv4AEGIR123

harem?

WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv6WoofWoof

most confusing grammar

moises_vahn
moises_vahnLv12moises_vahn

Que pendejo inventa un primer hijo aparte de shikamaru para ser la nave del mc no al propio shika es de tontos hacer esa mierda que decepcion.

Tupan
TupanLv4Tupan

Interesting. Reborn as my favorite character ShikamaruđŸ€˜Thanks for the chapter

Jinchusage
JinchusageLv14Jinchusage

Sigh, for 6 chapters I was hoping the author would create something original worth enjoying but like most of the others, they also thought it necessary to attempt a rewrite at a well established completed work of art.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Name2486
Name2486Lv5Name2486

thanks for the chapter.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Harem_Seeker
Harem_SeekerLv13Harem_Seeker

Shikamaru........ Emmmmmm thats not that bad...... right?

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

argospaceman
argospacemanLv4argospaceman

eyyyy shikamarnu

ViniDrako23
ViniDrako23Lv4ViniDrako23

Thanks for the chapter