Gu Zhen Ren
Great! A notch above the rest of the novels here in terms of descriptive quality! More clear than "Nightfall too!" However, the opening paragraph could omit several words to flow better. "In a dense rainforest—scorching sunlight penetrated gaps between the canopy of leaves in the rainforest and shone down. The air was hot and humid; the dense vegetation luxuriant, flourishing due to abundant rainwater. The tree vines intertwined and tree roots interlocked, forming layers of obstructions." I'm not sure about the usage of the semicolon and the following descriptions.