Comments of chapter undefined of Universe Creator
Universe Creator
Ellenad
Chapter comments20
Your story is actually a good one. For me you managed to give your Characters dimensions to which I as a normal person can relate to. Which makes it much easier to understand and relate to the actions and decisions the Character takes. Till now the bit of stupidity of the Mc gave him more personality which makes him seem more like a real person not like the idea of somebody. I also liked the POV's of the Mc's friend it gave the Universe much more background and enriched it in a good way. If you have more Ideas about such a POV than just write it and post it. And don't you dare to drop the story just because of a few snops who like to hate every story that not proceeding the way they like it. Your story is great the way it is now and for me it's one of the best Fan Fiction I've recently found on this platform. My best wishes to you and continue the good work.
The story is nice. Ignore the comment from people who think they are smart, the MC was a normal person who faced a meteor decided to give him a finger for me his current behavior is fine and for the power level, the people who are complain is one of those people who only like stories about a superpowered guy who from the start can defeat almost anyone. [img=recommend]
bruv you can't let other peoples complaints influence your story so much. the people complaing probably havent even gotten this far. they atent your real fans. just relax and write what you wan to write about. ptherwise whats the point. trust me i also write a god mc story where the mc is stupid in the begining but progresses and develops. personally i dont think hes that stupid after all ive seen far worse but if you want you can read my story if you ever have writers block.
People very much like to bitch and complain, but in the end. It is YOUR story. And your should write it for you, dont bend to conventional prejudice but hold your back straight. Hold pride in what you like and your own creation, your own imagination. Screw those that like to hurt you, for what? If you dont like the story, drop it, leave. If not keep reading. Theres a difference between constructive criticism and pulling someone down because it doesnt go how youd like. Dont worry mate, you do you and people will acknowledge it.
In my personally opinion I love the story but the MC bugging me iT might be. Because I like a mix of ruthless and sparing but Honestly think he should murder all the guardians. Who Come after him or the’ll keep coming back and as much as a Vilain that come back is cool I think you show focus a little More on the universal building then fIghting even though fighting is cool i rather see more universal building.
