i approve MAX!!!!!

starting chapter 6 the writing quality dropped considerably and it became hard to fully understand the story and go with its flow, it started being more MTL, a shame since it started great and the story was interesting

why write the synopsis in english if the story is in spanish .......................................................................................................................................................................

why did the writing quality drop so suddenly ??

it's still early in the story, so you can change it, you can maybe not make it an instant mastery of jutsu, he can know the jutsu but he needs to practice and master it step by step, giving him everything at the start is boring most of the time and you hit a writer block easy.

which ordinary person get 3k to 4k $ net, i really would like to meet them

the contract ability is good and has a lot of potential, but why only females, is it like a harem thingy, if it was a problem with limitations there are many that you could apply, so why limit it only to females.

what is wrong with that, if i had the possibility I would

I don't know if the author deletes negative reviews, but the grammar is awful, it is barely readable. I suggest a rewrite because the sentences don't make sense.

one eye can lock space; like in an area nothing can move, and there is a price to pay so he could move things inside like it takes too much energy the second eye should be able to enhance his genjutsu since it has become an important part of his fighting style, so maybe projecting illusions into reality

get well man u are doing a great job

the story is a good read if not chaotic, recommend for those who want to waste a bit of time, it is quite entertaining ...........................................................................................

i like how the chapter ended

Amen brother, finally some kindred spirit

what is this chap about ???? i didn't get it

the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao ..................... ..................... ............... ......

yep it is

looking forward to the next chapter, and I regret not having 100 more to read

the drop in views is natural, the sense of novelty dies down, and some like me wait for a few chapters before reading them all at once. don't get discouraged, the game of throne is boring as a lot had said, but I think you're making it more interesting, just remember that jump chain is meant to be 10 or so chapters a world before moving to the next and coming back to some old world, I understand that since this is the first world and his base it's going to take some more chapters, just do you

exceptionally well written, very intriguing, pulls you right in and this is only 12 chapters, you can only guess the rest ....................................