Comments of chapter undefined of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

While you're trying your original twist, the fact is that this exact twist is a cliche troupe in many world-hopping novels. Either by mistake or by design, MC teleports/ascends to another world, becomes seriously injured when crossing the void, and meets some local forces who help him familiarise with the world. Saying that, this arc seems to be going in a good direction so far. I really am a bit frustrated by the fact that Leylin didn't clean up the teleportation altar or whatever it was. In this world of wizardry, how can he feel secure letting a corpse lay peacefully next to the altar? And that Gargamol or whatever giant spirit also died there, what if he placed a backhand? Like... MC isn't supposed to be perfect and should mess up, but this mess felt a bit too forced. As if the Heavenly Dao (you, author) blinded the MC's eyes for a while; the opposite of Deus ex Machina, or a plot armour; a self-damaging plot sword! Not complaining about anything else though. It's a superb fanfiction. It totally scratches my WMW itch 👍