Comments of chapter undefined of The Shinobi of Straw Hats

disapointing , i mean why doing a fanfic with a new MC if nothing change at all and stay canon ( i mean i like the mc and all and but if each arc ending is a the same as canon ...

He might as well not have joined the crew for all he has accomplished. Him pushing back Akainu should have been enough to save Ace. Ace was uninjured and right there, those few seconds would have been enough to get Luffy and Jon out of there. Marco was on Akainu seconds after he killed Ace, to prevent him from killing Luffy also. Those seconds Jon won would have been enough to have Marco and Ace team up against Akainu. Jimbei was right there, those few seconds would have been enough for him to assist.

this must be one piece novel with addition of insignificant main character

The outcome is almost cannon, Kinda disappointed. even If ace couldnt be saved, I was expecting some major change from cannon..

well that was a disappointment, as always he didn't do shit..

Really disappointed not sure if I want to continue this or not I’m conflicted since it’s a really well written fanfic till now but what’s the point of a new si/oc if nothing changes for the better. All he’s done is make the straw hats richer and a tiny bit stronger along with saving bon clay. This was the one spot where you could have made a positive change to the story like whitebeard arriving and saving them from akainu after Jon stopped him with susano. Please think about rewriting this chapter I don’t want to discourage your writing but aces death was meaningless at this point they already now their weak and need to get stronger from experiencing Kuma on saboady and the war. Just think about rewriting this chapter cause I feel like a lot of people are gunna be disappointed with it.

Here i thought ace would be saved, I mean tbh, he was able to repel akainu and was given enough time to let the other WB Pirates to help out, whitebeard himself would have been able to reach akainu as well, also jinbe & iva+inazuma as well. It doesn't matter how he couldn't get up anymore after repelling akainu, but him being able to repel akainu and gave an opening for the rest was enough to have saved ace. But NOPE!

Jon could’ve been the one to take the hit and use izangi to wake up later in like a coffin and get the rewards like enough points for rinnegan for the used eye

The author is like saying to us I won’t change anything so here a present conqueror Haki , humph just because you gave us a present won’t make us happy baka

I’ve been holding it off for a long while Now, hoping this story will get better. im fed up now, I’m dropping this waste of my time!

you don't have creativity to make a plot right? disgusting piracy~ shameless pirate

same as cannon. not worth of my time reading this shit man. i just scroll it down until the end. thx 4 the chapter btw.😑😑😑

MC is Madara in a sense so it is obvious that he will have conqueror Haki... Fking weak Shiet mc is good as non I feel so wasted that I wasted my time on this shiet where there was no real change at all... A lot of copy paste and edit... If I knew it was like this I wouldn't have followed this trash..

That was too bad Ace still died nothing changes 😔

disappointing. Why must Ace die. Why would the character update a change in small parts that neither significantly change the story nor change the big events that would change the story? Story This is hugely disappointing. At least I was expecting Ace to survive and Whitebeard to die. And now most likely whitebeard dies in the next semester. Creating a character and not drastically changing the story is I don't know what to say.

is this still a fanfic or are we all just watching one piece play out again. I'm not saying Ace has to survive, but we haven't had a single arc that ended differently. Sure the little details within change with Jon's presence, but the final product remains unchanged at the end of each arc. Jon is literally a passerby in this story. I'm sad I have to drop this, it was genuinely one of my favorite on this site. Goodluck Author-san.

this is sad, I thought ace only sacrifice himself because he had no other choice as he don't have enough time to counter but with the addition of MC haaiist, thank you for everything, it was a good read, but with this I can assume it will be the same thing with Canon, so bye.

bruh...... it's disappointing..... there's no change even though it's fanfic....

what the point of the Mc being in the war if he is not going to change the outcome.

Dropped.