I liked the concept and the start of the story. But after he got unhinged, the story's pace just accelerated, and it is hard to keep track of it for me. So sadly, I have to drop it by ch 90. On another note, please remove the system tag if it is not in the story as it is disappointing to wait for it to appear.

It was an interesting concept, but the author is very contradictory in terms of wanting to follow the plot. MC makes changes that should have changed the plot, but the author just gloss over them and follows the plot like a checklist with no reason. Not to mention, the translator skips certain things from the novel, which would have helped in character and world building, which makes people unable to immerse themselves into the novel. AND some tags are simply given to the novel as I specifically came to read a system novel that made me personally VERY DISAPPOINTED!!!

so now screenshot is not allowed 😭

to be honest, i liked it while the initial story seemed like he would be using the omnitrix for more than just fighting, but the story developed towards that direction, especially when he joined teen titans.

haha, there are so many other places to be toxic. Why spam the authors of novels you don't like? There are so many choices out there.

The sad part for me is that he can freaking release a kyuubi, but he prefers to sacrifice his life. kyuubi is a loose cannon but against people like akainu, that's a better power than that weak susanoo

I just hope Zoro's epic moment in this episode will not be stolen, where he took in all injuries from luffy to stop kuma

Well, I was bored and didn't expect much when I started reading this. After all, it's a Lion King ff, but after finishing it, I can't help but be impressed by the wonderful tale he presented in the short but fun story. I felt that I should at least leave a few words before removing it from my library. Thank you for giving this wonderful story.

honestly, it took me by surprise as I wasn't expecting much when I started reading it. but so far, it's really good and kept me hooked to finish it in one reading. Is it a translation or your original?

I think you skipped a chapter or two after Chap 134.

now I really like this novel

oh, I love this. much better than being just a human breeder

this system is basically a harem style, but I do hope there is one that actually boosts the family rather than boosts the host for having more wives and kids

I can't help but give 5 star rating. It's an incredible piece of work 👏 I hope you don't drop this

I enjoyed reading the 20 chapters. Hopefully, the remaining chapters will be just as entertaining.

are these novels not in webnovel? we have to go to other sites to read them?

I really like the author's view on God

Not exactly, if we take by word count and go by 2000 per chapter then there would be over 850 chapters. and most webnovels in Qidian dont have 2k per chapter.

It was a good story and quite well written except for some parts directly copied from original which should have been modified to fit in with your characters but were not. Wish you good luck in future works.

Must say its one of the scenes that should have sticked to original Lavender saying to Hermoine was understandable as former attends Divination classes and latter quit But both Eddie and Quinn don't take divination classes