Demon_King22
I love the concept for your story but I think you started too far ahead. He already has a powerful armour made of end game materials, super advanced technology, his alternate selfs are already among the strongest on Earth despite being the same age(I think). Would have been much more interesting if you made it so that all his alternate self we’re starting off at the same time and by using the meta knowledge he has directed them into power while providing himself information and advanced blueprints.
so I got a question for you offer is Spider-Man going to be in relationship with spider Gwen Spider-Woman and silk and also I liked Spider-Man to be with in the future as well the list is she Hulk and susan storm and Wanda maximoff and storm from the X-Men keep up the good work can't wait to see you next chapter of this series 👍👍👍
Okay a nice start, it's jsut the first chapter so I don't have much to talk about, my advice for you is to not make this an over exagerated power fantasy, we already saw a lot of those, if you want to have you Spider-man fight Thor and Hulk fine, but make him struggle for victory, also, try to make him be in conflict with his knew life, powers and knowledge just enoug to make him relatable. If you are going to give him a romantic interrest my vote is for Jennifer Walters (She-Hulk) or Betty Ross (Red She-hulk), both if you are going to make a harem. All said, thanks for the chapter, hope to see more soon.
Story started of by explaining why being Spiderman sucks… yet there he is with dead parents and uncle to show for it. For a genius of such outrageous proportions to not have contingencies in place to prevent such tragedy, I can only lament his failure. ( although, after hearing how he described his aunt I’m not entirely convinced he didn’t plan it himself) All jokes aside, this was a good start, thanks.
I already read a novel a while ago with this same tendency. Protagonist reincarnates in Marvel, has memories of his past life, thanks to his meta knowledge, he knows a lot about the future of many universes. He has many variants and one of them is a mutant with an ability that generates a passive attraction and transforms other beings into faithful servants. Women usually fall madly in love, especially strong and telepathic ones. Jean Gray and Emma Frost in this case.