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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: The Spider in Endless Sea of Possibilities

Rayodino
RayodinoLv3Rayodino

I love the concept for your story but I think you started too far ahead. He already has a powerful armour made of end game materials, super advanced technology, his alternate selfs are already among the strongest on Earth despite being the same age(I think). Would have been much more interesting if you made it so that all his alternate self we’re starting off at the same time and by using the meta knowledge he has directed them into power while providing himself information and advanced blueprints.

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

Thanks for the chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]best girl

Lennon_Leadbetter
Lennon_LeadbetterLv4Lennon_Leadbetter

so I got a question for you offer is Spider-Man going to be in relationship with spider Gwen Spider-Woman and silk and also I liked Spider-Man to be with in the future as well the list is she Hulk and susan storm and Wanda maximoff and storm from the X-Men keep up the good work can't wait to see you next chapter of this series 👍👍👍

Kamui_Yurinagi
Kamui_YurinagiLv4Kamui_Yurinagi

Thanks for the chapter and keep up the amazing work and can harem be Ghost spider Silk Natasha romanoff She Hulk Gamora Galatica Kitty Pryde Susan storm X-23 Mj Ororo Munroe Jean Grey Rogue Raven Darkholme Irene Wanda Maria Hill

Camilo_Montes_333
Camilo_Montes_333Lv2Camilo_Montes_333

He is brother or cousin of rogue

Marvel_Fan8502
Marvel_Fan8502Lv4Marvel_Fan8502

i don't get is the mc a reincarnator or a guy who has knowledge about the universes and can connect with alternate versions

Zhorvak
ZhorvakLv13Zhorvak

Okay a nice start, it's jsut the first chapter so I don't have much to talk about, my advice for you is to not make this an over exagerated power fantasy, we already saw a lot of those, if you want to have you Spider-man fight Thor and Hulk fine, but make him struggle for victory, also, try to make him be in conflict with his knew life, powers and knowledge just enoug to make him relatable. If you are going to give him a romantic interrest my vote is for Jennifer Walters (She-Hulk) or Betty Ross (Red She-hulk), both if you are going to make a harem. All said, thanks for the chapter, hope to see more soon.

Illuminati_
Illuminati_Lv2Illuminati_

Very interesting and a good start. But i feel like there is very less interaction between the characters and more monologue? Will there be more interaction in future chapters?

Lonely_Immortal_
Lonely_Immortal_Lv14Lonely_Immortal_

This sound like Infinite Ladder: Marvel?

Gerier
GerierLv4Gerier

please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4please_be_gentle_

I mostly read harem but currently am reading a non-harem becuz gwen is the fml so for me a harem without gwen is useless just like this fanfic.

Ray54715893
Ray54715893Lv3Ray54715893

Spider the Conqueror

Bert_Torres
Bert_TorresLv14Bert_Torres

YES AWESOME STORY

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Story started of by explaining why being Spiderman sucks… yet there he is with dead parents and uncle to show for it. For a genius of such outrageous proportions to not have contingencies in place to prevent such tragedy, I can only lament his failure. ( although, after hearing how he described his aunt I’m not entirely convinced he didn’t plan it himself) All jokes aside, this was a good start, thanks.

Sammhy
SammhyLv11Sammhy

I already read a novel a while ago with this same tendency. Protagonist reincarnates in Marvel, has memories of his past life, thanks to his meta knowledge, he knows a lot about the future of many universes. He has many variants and one of them is a mutant with an ability that generates a passive attraction and transforms other beings into faithful servants. Women usually fall madly in love, especially strong and telepathic ones. Jean Gray and Emma Frost in this case.

HHKing
HHKingLv14HHKing

The beginning is interesting so far.

Shreyash1
Shreyash1Lv4Shreyash1

Dude there are so many mistakes in the chapter.

namenotimportant
namenotimportantLv4namenotimportant

started good then i became whatt from middle

a_BMO
a_BMOLv13a_BMO

Good first chapter the only complaint is the grammar

Decimation
DecimationLv5Decimation

Thanks for chapter.