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Comments of chapter undefined of The Bloodline System

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BlackBliss
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SwordFishOfNoon
SwordFishOfNoonLv6SwordFishOfNoon

why all the characters seems mad about every little thing? yes, the world and all that crap but every character?

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Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv11Ouroboros001

Shame this isn't a harem novel, honestly. Perfect setup for it to me. I usually avoid novels that make it a point that they don't have a harem. Those are usually trash. Largely because it usually means they can't write romance, therefore, can't write normal human relationships to save their life. However, you had that romance tag in there at the top and you're not a female romance novel writer, so I was still interested. Not that I have anything against women writing romance, but they usually have a lot of NTR-like stuff in their novels. Ain't my cup of tea. I do have to admit that I directly skipped the protagonists beta male chapters and went directly to where you asked people to read to go avoid those. Sorry, I'm not sorry. The Series is pretty decent for Webnovel. A few syntax errors, you can't take the plot seriously, and sometimes it does feel a bit confusing with your pacing. These last few chapters would have flowed better if you had this whole flashback thing not happen, but instead just as a normal scene before you timelapse.

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FATHER_OF_LOLIS
FATHER_OF_LOLISLv4FATHER_OF_LOLIS

Thanks for the chapter!

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NovelGreed
NovelGreedLv4NovelGreed

Thanks.

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Kneel_you_peasant
Kneel_you_peasantLv4Kneel_you_peasant

Thank you for the chapter.

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Hemanth_
Hemanth_Lv12Hemanth_

good chapter

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Some hope for this MC. First was his choice to assign attributed evenly and now this chapter. This novel overall would have been better if he had some redeeming quality, instead the author chose the easy path of making him so useless that any improvement would seem amazing.

boov
boovLv5boov

i think mc being a lab rat cuz he van increase grade is not realistic...cuz with that in mind his brother should have been cut down to pieces the moment he used all those crazy powers at the age of 8 ...8 is the age a boy still learning to form thoughts 🤣

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Krispyclean
KrispycleanLv14Krispyclean

Nice chaps my guy.

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Eva_Cain_1253
Eva_Cain_1253Lv2Eva_Cain_1253

I am like the story line .I have trouble putting it down to do house work .

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bdbobdover
bdbobdoverLv4bdbobdover

Miss Aimee must secretly be someone very powerful and influential.

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DaysMonarch
DaysMonarchLv15DaysMonarch

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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SKYoupley
SKYoupleyLv14SKYoupley

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Rittu23
Rittu23Lv15Rittu23

thanks for the chapter

Obsidian_Owl
Obsidian_OwlLv15Obsidian_Owl

[img=exp]Thxs for the chap[img=exp]

Virat_Ias
Virat_IasLv1Virat_Ias

A classic Chinese novel.. Where after every 4 words 5th is insult to hero...

ryan_bhattarai
ryan_bhattaraiLv1ryan_bhattarai

so she saves the mc who commited murder jst cuz he is bullied mc and is even willing to train he so he can do it properly ..wat nonsense is this..writter seems like he doesnt know mentality works or the teacher doesnt care if a murderer is walking free in school who will kill other students if he so chooses

_X26
_X26Lv12_X26

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Eva_Cain_1253
Eva_Cain_1253Lv2Eva_Cain_1253

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon