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  • Virat_Ias
    Virat_Ias2yr
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    A classic Chinese novel.. Where after every 4 words 5th is insult to hero...

    Ch 29 The Upcoming Duel
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • Virat_Ias
    Virat_Ias2yr
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    There's a stark difference in novel introduction and and 1st 3 chapters of novel. Everything mentioned in intro is like being too goddy shoes, being too good that he doesn't want anyone to die, doesn't want anyone to get on knees etc etc. Not that anything is wrong with hero but there's mismatch btwn intro and story. You should change intro according to story. Thank you

    Rise of the Legendary Emperor
    Fantasy · don_offl
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  • Virat_Ias
    Virat_Ias2yr
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    One of the best novels.. I would like to congratulate author and ask him toh write further some great novels. Best of luck brother for your future

    Unsealing Emptiness
    Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes
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