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There's a stark difference in novel introduction and and 1st 3 chapters of novel. Everything mentioned in intro is like being too goddy shoes, being too good that he doesn't want anyone to die, doesn't want anyone to get on knees etc etc. Not that anything is wrong with hero but there's mismatch btwn intro and story. You should change intro according to story. Thank you