Comments of chapter undefined of The Bloodline System

I'm definitely enjoying it so far, looking forward to more chaps!

honestly it's still early to say that but untill now it's good the setup is a little cliche but it's good and you can hardly judge the story now the number of chapters is still small so no one can completely no the ones that mostly give reviews now are mostly trolls so keep it up

If the Mc becomes the type to “help” ppl in need and bs I’ll literally drop the thing I hate most are hero mcs they’re so boring and honestly helping ppl in my opinion is stupid especially in a world where power rules above all else. As long as your powerful enough even if you end up slaughtering an entire country the rest can only smile and praise you for doing it so well and hope they’re not next. Maybe it’s just me but even if I didn’t have a tragic history if I was living in such worlds I would’ve been that type of mc

Well, initially i thought t the MC was an annoying little bugger but him getting some backbone is very nice. The plot is good so far, looking foward to more

I'm pretty sure the readers are only kinda dissatisfied by the kind of life Gustav had/has to go through everyday. I guess it was a necessity for you to make it so. Kinda okay, since this part is completely upto the Author without us readers having any right to question about it. At most, maybe you could've lowered down on the 'intensity'.

it is cool

I am enjoying it so far author! A suggestion though: you could change speed to agility and then agility to dexterity or something like that. It would make them seem a little less similar (and people who ignore the author note wouldnt have to ask later). Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]

well, i felt that the "mc being bullied cliche" is a bit forced. or maybe, all the side characters (antagonist) are plainly stupid. many people clearly saw how did the mc beat up the three students and yet the disciplinary action still couldn't believe it but instead, they thought that he used some kind of drug. if they were really a disciplinary action, then shouldn't they investigate the matter further to find out what really happened? but since it was too forced, and wanted the mc treated as nothing but trash, the side characters ended up being stupid, a cliche that i am already too sicked hearing about.

I believe the character is progressing in a steady way, and it would make no sense in going from wimp to superman in one chapter...so keep the powering up speed as it is

Im honestly enjoying thIs story a lot keep it up my guy good stuff

my initial impression of the novel was it was mediocre but chapter by chapter I think it's getting better and better

The author is making the story about the mc vs the world/ society and it really seems like a forced plot but I think that is what it is really in the story to emphasize that he is hated by everyone and grow strong and prove himself to everyone. I still haven't rated or dropped this story because I have to read until the 20 chapters before criticizing the story. For what it seems the first few chapters is kind of bad because he is dumb and lack at so many things but continuing to next chapter you will see how the mc improve. I am a lazy reader to the point that I will read the 5 or 10 chapters of a story then moved to the latest chapter update (which is over 100/200/500 chapters sometimes) then if I started to like the story I will reread it again. I hate mc development and liked the mc improvement. I don't know where this story is going but I will continue reading it because I'm beginning to like it. I also don't have anything to read in this app so I will stick to this. Hoping that this story will be really good. (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。

to me it's getting better

are you a new author if so sits understandable due to your lack of experience I'll just point out a few things up to this point thought I'm not sure about later so 1. Characters 8n a very honest opinion the Characters are one dimensional and cliche with no depth as the world revolves around the mc so focus on building complex Characters with individual personalities , backgrounds and way of working instead of everyone just having a herd mentality of calling the mc trash , Characters are living not tools for the mc or author 2. World building You really tried here for a new author (if so) but once again depth , add some world lore , what's the currency?,what's the history?,any religion ,what are the various cultures?etc 3.Plot the plot Is very basic with only one goal in mind at a time and it's from the mc , try a more complex plot with many events interrelating and intertwining with each other and from different characters not a good impression for me but it's a start I know you can do better just focus on your imperfections and work on them to improve I really appreciate your efforts here and I know you'll go far

I'm a tad bit concerned at how he enjoys torturing people, but all in all, great story so far

Thanks for the chapter

I think author need to explain more bout hey they looks....and bout agility and speed ...say thanks to Google senpai....

well I'm going to say it this line made me crack up 🤣 ( if the bundle of notes was a female it would have shouted HARRASMENT ) 😂

Very interesting novel, it has a ton of potential and i will continue to read!