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From my understanding of the novel until now we only have a socially and physically bullied MC which explains his lack of character and cowardice. But as we can see he is making progress to change his character for the better which is a type of character development that most stories lack. The thing that will determine if the story is good or not will depend on how his character will grow from now, if for example he grows to be a hero-like character then this will be bad and unrealistic. The most appropriate progression from a social and psychological point of view will be an anti-hero MC or straight up villainous MC, that's my honest opinion. Anyways this is your story and you are doing a very good job with it till now, keep up the good work 👍.
To tell the truth I like the way jake acted right now and support it 100%, cause let's analyse the situation and Sarah's character, first of all the Sarah is doing comes from either one of 2 emotions the first is simply being horny which is a side effect of the bloodline and second is just that she wants jake because well he is strong and she has already shown that she will attatch herself to strong people (kyle before the whole new planet thing) before. Now to my personal opinion if this was a general xianxia or apocalypse novel I honestly wouldn't give a fu*k what you make him do, but sadly it isn't and Jake deserves much better than Sarah, I don't know enough about Ruby to judge but she is a much better choice right now, and if someone says he should have a one night stand then I will say sorry but I hate reading about a man-whore and you're much better than writing someone like that Ark. Anyways that was the opinion of a reader who has been this novel since chapter 17 was posted, and I wish you all the best Ark. Sorry for the long rant I will return to the Darkness again .