Saltzmaster
Sometimes the path with the most dead ends leads the farthest.
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Saltzmaster1mthReplied to It_Is_Me_TttI think it’s good, means they’ll underestimate him😈
Adam ignored the people giving him strange looks as he constantly cursed under his breath. That fat pig! Just where the hell did he get the face paint from? I just can't seem to wash it off of my face!- Saltzmaster1mthReplied to DFP_86
Yes but he’s young and making mistakes early is better so he won’t make them later when the stakes are higher. Plus that’s just some good quality humor😂
Meanwhile, Edward had gotten a paintbrush from somewhere and was currently painting Adam's face to resemble that of a circus clown. - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to Reviewed
Why would the highest treasure in the universe that focused the greatest magus to exist have a function to help its user sense mana? Its like the end game equipment in a game teaching you what button to press to attack
The white lotus! - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to DaoistjgSy04
The highest treasure in the universe would probably have been created or developed towards the assumption that the user could already feel mana
And that is why this potion was named the Potion of Hope. For it gave a mortal hope to transcend boundaries and become a Magus! - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to Zilla0
Its 50% more than a year’s tuition… plus its only part of the reward. How is that not expensive?
The crystal ball, on the other hand, contained knowledge of the Rank 1 spell, Eldritch Beam! This ranged spell had one of the most devastating attacks among Rank 1 spells. Its market price was 15 platinum pieces! - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to Reviewed
It’s the best first rank spell, they’ll probably only learn normal rank one spells
The crystal ball, on the other hand, contained knowledge of the Rank 1 spell, Eldritch Beam! This ranged spell had one of the most devastating attacks among Rank 1 spells. Its market price was 15 platinum pieces! - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to Jack_Priper
Its relative pressure, once he has a stronger body the pressure would be increased. The test is to see how strong the body and soul are compared to the normal standard
"Hah!" Edward slapped his thigh exaggeratedly. "Although analytical and combat skills can be improved and sharpened over time, aptitude cannot! This is something a person is born with." - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to KamogAdam would go to the space inside the lotus every day and absorb the smaller white motes of light. He could see the progress with his own eyes, and he was extremely ecstatic about it.
- Saltzmaster1mthReplied to TOG9
How are they still unconscious? It feels like it’s been hours…
The man's gaze then fell on the few bulging money pouches on the youth. A moment later, his gaze swept through the clearing inside the woods and fell on the two unconscious boys. - Saltzmaster1mthCommentedTurning around, he saw a girl with long purple hair tied back in a ponytail. She was monitoring his vitals on a tablet. She was sucking on a lollipop, moving it from one side to the other with a thoughtful look.
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You should stop counting specific seconds. Nothing and no one can do that short of system level power. It’s more unrealistic than superpowers and kinda ruins any sort of authenticity for your work. Just a writing recommendation, I love your book so far
"Do you think you'll die if I rip off all your paws? Well, we'll know that answer in eleven seconds!" Damien smirked before abruptly turning around and bouncing off another wind barrier. - Saltzmaster1mthCommentedDespite their size and thick fur, they moved extremely fast and agile. Their jaws were ready to be the first to taste the delicious human flesh.
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How does every monster in the area wake up at exactly nightfall (impossible to know when nightfall is) plus they all woke up at the same time and then they all immediately know that there people and where they are?
Many silhouettes emerged from under the snowdrifts with a loud crunch. Like shadows, they immediately scattered all over the area, some already attacking each other even though only ten seconds had passed. - Saltzmaster1mthCommented
Anyone else confused about the exact time that night starts? How is that possible? Also no natural monster or creature would wake up at exactly the same time every night. Seems like an absurd plot hole to me
"Calm down. What we need to do now is come up with a defense strategy. We're going to have to survive out here for ten whole minutes." - Saltzmaster1mthReplied to Rex_Lindsay
Well he’s made some pretty dumb choices already so it’s to be expected until he can have some solid character development
Adam realized he could no longer stand by and just watch her fight, clearly outnumbered. - Saltzmaster1mthCommentedA long needle appeared in Adam's hand, and his legs were covered in electric shocks.
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Are they just gonna fight right there in the hall?
Blue lines of energy spread throughout her exoskeleton, filling her body with power. - Saltzmaster1mthCommented'This is going to be tough...'
- Saltzmaster1mthCommentedIncubator and the Golden Egg
- Saltzmaster1mthReplied to smokenreave
He doesn’t want to fight random humans for no reason, he wants to fight the people who tried to kill him because it was simply more convenient to do so
"Because some people are more like monsters than monsters themselves."