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Comments of chapter undefined of Affinity:Chaos

Lori_Fernandez_9090
Lori_Fernandez_9090Lv1Lori_Fernandez_9090

Thanks for the chapter

heynicedick
heynicedickLv5heynicedick

Nice

William_Litsch
William_LitschLv11William_Litsch

so far this novel is all tell no show. no world shown. no cultivation shown. no training shown. no affinity practice shown. it is literally commentary by people about what happened rather than showing what happened. it's impossible to write a good novel this way.

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Rjay_Melancholy
Rjay_MelancholyLv2Rjay_Melancholy

love this story. really🌺❤️ I will start giving stone starting tommorow 12am

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

thisisit0101
thisisit0101Lv4thisisit0101

👍

Ayoni02
Ayoni02Lv1Ayoni02

Some of you guys are weird You're complaining about no action, no power scaling, no cultivation etc. Yet forgetting that our MC has not even become an elementalist yet.

FelixAcedia
FelixAcediaLv14FelixAcedia

congratulations small Grey, you worked hard 😉

heynicedick
heynicedickLv5heynicedick

Im gonna start commenting and upvoting others on good Novels im reading

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Hahaha...nice one.

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always and can't wait to read your next chapters thanks for your hard work 👏

Romano_Santillan
Romano_SantillanLv3Romano_Santillan

this story is somehow familiar but I like it.

Yichen_Yao
Yichen_YaoLv11Yichen_Yao

what's missing is just a childhood friend who he likes

Kenneth_Aitken
Kenneth_AitkenLv2Kenneth_Aitken

here is a comment since you asked

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Thanks

Kirk_rw_C
Kirk_rw_CLv14Kirk_rw_C

I appreciate how you show him struggling with insecurities and inadequacies pushed in him by others.But his struggle is to keep himself positive about the future, while working hard to prepare for the future.

Athosanime
AthosanimeLv11Athosanime

its progress has been a bit slow buhhh it's interesting and I love the fact that it doesn't remove parents. most novels get rid of parents to not have anything holding the main character down but this novel shows that parents can be part of the protagonist's growth

LordofRavens
LordofRavensLv4LordofRavens

Well at least he has confidence in himself.

Tha_Reaper
Tha_ReaperLv13Tha_Reaper

I love the interactive writing keep it up

LittleWanderer
LittleWandererLv3LittleWanderer

If he so scared to lie to her why lie about the bullying you rascal.

Lisakun
LisakunLv15Lisakun

the story starting out so far and how you're building up the character