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Weren't his clothes blue? the title of the last chapter was "The man in blue clothes".
Reached his heart? I guess the humans of that world are built different then us.
That seems weird to me that no one wanted an abundant, free food. Plus 99% of the time pine nuts are used as a part of a dish and not just eaten on their own. (Although they are good on their own as a snack.)
No, the shop owner still has the 10 spirit stones as the deposit which is why the MC took the paper, ink, AND 6 spirit stones.
Why does the guy on the cover have three hands? His right hand is holding a sword behind his head, his left hand is holding the girl, while his other right hand is also holding the girl up, and it seems to be growing out of his hip or groin area. Is this explained in the story or was it just a cool picture to use as a book cover?
It's my book, so of course it's 5-stars. I'm not a "You dare" or "You're courting death" every other chapter writer. I prefer to have slow ride with world building instead of the "you made me feel bad, now I'm going to murder the tens-of-thousands of people in your clan" type of writer. I think I have a good idea for a story and will try to put it to paper like how I see it in my brain. Hope you like it.
He should still have the flying sword he got from his book; you know, the one that uses his poison qi.
"It looks awfully like" is the normal way to use that phrase.
"But once he made not of his consciousness" doesn't make sense and could be deleted to fix it.
Yeah, but it would have made more sense to call it Z than spider.