Springs_Halo
hey author, I'm like a full year late to party but unlike others I think you are handling the early writing of a 15 year old boy correctly. yes, he should be better in the future, but for now this kid is just that, A KID. and he is surely acting like one. looking forward to what this novel has in store
Okay so this is my first read, I did see that chapterâs composition does get increasingly better as the story progressed. However, Iâm left with this yearning feeling. I wished the interaction with one of the God assuming strongest and highest rank beings in his verse wasnât so lightly taken. I was wishing the interaction wouldâve left a more defined and indebted impersonation on Grey. It truly felt grey, no pun intended. I was hoping that Grey took in mind the cruel world he lived in, and he would now have to carry himself differently due to the power he now held. I was hoping for more information on the God of Chaos, even his demise. I just felt this chapter couldâve been so much better.