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Comments of chapter undefined of Affinity:Chaos

watthehutt
watthehuttLv2watthehutt

@author you're ***ist towards pink

Felthat
FelthatLv15Felthat

I pray to any and all gods....please make this mc more intelligent. cause as he is i wanna bash his head into a steel beam till his nonexistent brain matter creates a rorschach test painting on the floor

laststand
laststandLv2laststand

Pls Fix the MC's attitude toward gods and other people.He keeps blaming sh*t to innocent people

samsara_5295
samsara_5295Lv1samsara_5295

The novel got potential but the MC ruined it🤦‍♂️

Tsuna_Aotsuki
Tsuna_AotsukiLv3Tsuna_Aotsuki

Oh pls like others pls fix this young master attitude of MC pls. His even a moron.

pyroxys
pyroxysLv5pyroxys

hey author, I'm like a full year late to party but unlike others I think you are handling the early writing of a 15 year old boy correctly. yes, he should be better in the future, but for now this kid is just that, A KID. and he is surely acting like one. looking forward to what this novel has in store

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always and can't wait to read your next chapters thanks for your hard work

JohnLloyd_Reader
JohnLloyd_ReaderLv1JohnLloyd_Reader

I guess his starting at pink, then it would evolve to orange, to purple, to blue, and lastly violet right?

Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

Brian_Benson
Brian_BensonLv4Brian_Benson

Don't make the mc overpowered

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Thanks

Lori_Fernandez_9090
Lori_Fernandez_9090Lv1Lori_Fernandez_9090

Thanks for the chapter

Common_Boar
Common_BoarLv13Common_Boar

Okay so this is my first read, I did see that chapter’s composition does get increasingly better as the story progressed. However, I’m left with this yearning feeling. I wished the interaction with one of the God assuming strongest and highest rank beings in his verse wasn’t so lightly taken. I was wishing the interaction would’ve left a more defined and indebted impersonation on Grey. It truly felt grey, no pun intended. I was hoping that Grey took in mind the cruel world he lived in, and he would now have to carry himself differently due to the power he now held. I was hoping for more information on the God of Chaos, even his demise. I just felt this chapter could’ve been so much better.

BossKenshin
BossKenshinLv4BossKenshin

this author im sure is brat wannabe an adult but a brat inside

Ypauly
YpaulyLv2Ypauly

thnx for the chapter

Cygnuz
CygnuzLv6Cygnuz

poor boy

Tad_LaRue
Tad_LaRueLv15Tad_LaRue

Poor little dude can't catch a break. He is stupid and has low talent. Haha. thanks for the chapter.

Raphael_Ferreira
Raphael_FerreiraLv1Raphael_Ferreira

Obrigado pelo capĂ­tulo

Purgatorio_3
Purgatorio_3Lv3Purgatorio_3

If your a real man you gotta go pink -Someguy from The Player That Can't Level Up

Vishvendu_Pandey
Vishvendu_PandeyLv4Vishvendu_Pandey

thanks for the chapter

EMIN3M
EMIN3MLv14EMIN3M

thanks