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Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

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The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

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Erat
EratLv13Erat

Great chapters like always i think it would be better to reorginaze chapters i was reading in bulk so it wasnt hassle but changing ppl pov like that is exhausting when we get 1-2 chapters a day

3yr
NightWind
NightWindAuthorNightWind

Lol this is a good analogy 😂 note to self: stop trying to abuse my readers 🤣

Gulth:Is like when you are talking with a friend and in the middle of your story another wild friend (only with you and not with your other friend) appear and you start talking with him and you leave hanging the first friend and when the wild friend goes away you try to remember where you left hanging the first friend in the story.
3yr
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DaoistSpiritTurtle
DaoistSpiritTurtleLv14DaoistSpiritTurtle

Drennel is in for a rude awakening in 7 months and now she totally deserves what's coming to her. Before this I kinda felt a bit sorry for her situation but not anymore.

3yr
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Lobski
LobskiLv13Lobski

Drennel is that one annoying character that just won't shut the **** up

3yr
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_mori
_moriLv15_mori

Is there only one chaoter today?

3yr
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zhaderx
zhaderxLv4zhaderx

This was better written and easier to follow, you getting better author! 👍

3yr
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Reiji_Ozora
Reiji_OzoraLv15Reiji_Ozora

petrify, not petrified - at the end of the chapter. I'd comment on the paragraph, but it seems to be set to not allow comments.

3yr
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irl
irlLv7irl

thanks for the chapter! 😃 --drennel, for all her cunning, seems rather blind for not realizing that three powerful people will not follow another seemingly "weaker" person if they didn't know that he was more powerful than them.

3yr
LolSnowman
LolSnowmanLv15LolSnowman

It was a decent chapter Author, if oddly placed after the last. I had to go back to make sure I didn't miss anything after the report but it isn't too jarring. Slightly difficult to follow his reasoning on assuming his home would be attacked, especially considering the unlikeliness of it happening in safe zones. But it doesn't really detract too much.

3yr
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