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LolSnowman

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Reading and writing are my life. I'm a professional writer and editor who decided to try his hand at writing fictional pieces, check out my first novel "Atmas Rise" here on webnovel, thanks!

2019-11-04 JoinedUnited States
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman2d
    Commented

    It's always a Gu lol

    'Fiery Queen belongs to the Walkers Family. As for the Gu Family… why do I keep running into people with their surname? How many times have I encountered them by now? Are we destined to clash with each other constantly?'
    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman16d
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    A truly magnificent story. Thank you and congratulations Awespec. It was a masterful and compelling read and I can't help but feel sad it's over. Maybe in the future, you can go back, fine-tooth comb it for errors and continuity, etc., and publish it as a real book. You can be sure I'd buy it in a heartbeat to read once more and have it as part of my collection. Good luck in future endeavors and I'll continue to read whatever works you put out. Fan for life ✌️

    Ch 2331 End (2)
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman1mth
    Replied to Chris_Hinton

    You clearly haven't read much of the other comments about her. Yes I generalized but your opinion appears to be in the minority.

    "It's really ironic." Celine sighed as she looked up at the ceiling. "The potions I made to propagate Miasma are now being used to bring this kingdom to its knees. I wonder, if William knew this, would he feel disgusted with me? Would he be disappointed? What do you think, Oliver?"
    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Replied to Superdee

    Yeah, I figured that out at the end xD

    Famine
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    Oof

    He had no idea that this 'someone else's' path he just rejected was actually his own.
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    Same title as a few chapters ago?

    Famine
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Replied to Pasaim

    You mean Leonel?

    Leonidas didn't believe that such a powerful Sect would be so stupid, so he continued moving forward, slowly coming into contact with more and more people. 
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    What if you couldn't* is most likely what is meant here. For those possibly confused later.

    What if you could progress in cultivation any longer? What if you knew you had reached the absolute extremities of what cultivation could provide to you? What if you lived in a place where you knew it was impossible to transcend or take another step forward in cultivation… A place where the absolute limit was the Overlord Realm…?
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    subverting *expectations?

    However, how was this Ryu's fault, exactly? He wasn't a Ninth Heaven genius, and he certainly hadn't been at the start. He rose up from nothing, and now there would be a problem caused because he was too good at subverting exceptions? 
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    Who's lips? Not Dyon surely xD

    Another cry left Dyon's lips. Every time she called out, Dyon felt as though the wound was his own, that his own heart was being repeatedly stabbed, dripping with blood that singed the earth below. 
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented
    His muscles were compressed to the absolute extreme, giving him a somewhat lean silhouette. But his chest was broad and his shoulders were akin to boulders. Remembering a certain anime his dad really liked back on Earth, his own back could be said to have a demon face of its own, the sunlight getting lost in its deep crevices. 
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    I think this is Nero's dialogue?

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman4mth
    Commented

    What was this perceived slight? That the new Master and Hope just walked away without paying attention to Ryu?

    Ch 1577 Ryuuuuuu
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman5mth
    Commented

    Blood empress, demon succubus, supreme sub - Aina Brazinger everybody.

    This woman… why did her eyes look like that? It looked like she was ready to rob the cradle, as though if Leonel didn't push her down, she'd push him down instead. 
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman5mth
    Commented

    clones? not clowns right?

    Still, over these long decades, it could be said that Dyon's foundation had become incomparably sturdy. Though his main body hadn't refined pills in years, in order to support the Mortal Alliance, he had countless clowns that were almost perpetually refining pills. 
    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman5mth
    Commented

    you were*

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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman5mth
    Commented

    Leonidas?

    Leonidas didn't believe that such a powerful Sect would be so stupid, so he continued moving forward, slowly coming into contact with more and more people. 
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman6mth
    Replied to LolSnowman

    It's difficult to stay engaged due to the drawn out story sections that don't seem to contribute to an overarching goal. It seemed like a typical revenge story, with the usual continue to grow in strength tones. After the desert arc, you started strong with his return to the sect and his combat bet to steal more techniques. Then the romance bits that feel incongruous to the setting, now it's this battle with skeletons from seemingly out of nowhere with some god that automatically knew about our MC. I found myself mostly skipping most of the chapters waiting for a change as you never explained through the chapters why what was happening was even happening. I'm a huge proponent of not telling your readers and instead writing it into the story but it's hard to get a feel of the direction if seemingly random things occur because "reasons."In your defense, I wrote that when I first woke up and should be more tactful as you are being vulnerable in sharing your creative work. But if I have to keep paying for chapters that don't really add much then it doesn't feel worth it in the long run.

    Ch 381 Chapter 381- Still Within Control
    The Growth of a Titan
    Eastern · Tsetth
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman6mth
    Commented

    This is becoming much like what our MC said earlier. Boring. I will wait to see what happens but if this entire incident is just brushed aside I'm probably done giving this chances.

    Ch 381 Chapter 381- Still Within Control
    The Growth of a Titan
    Eastern · Tsetth
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  • LolSnowman
    LolSnowman6mth
    Replied to Benjamin_Gribnau

    Probably the Dividing Heaven Sky God

    Dividing Heaven was his Dao Title, a worthy name for a Founding Dao. 
    Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
    Action · Awespec
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