Comments of chapter undefined of The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

Good but could've been better. To make sure that the worldbuilding flows well, avoid putting a bunch of info on magic systems/internal monologue in one chapter. Instead, hold the information, release it bit by bit as the chapter progresses. This in turn will make sure that you won't bore the readers to death with a jumble of information that not everyone will remember as the story continues, also which you have to repeat once again in the future. Just my two cent.

So far its not so bad. I feel you have a great start and I look forward to see where this is going. I'm already about 80% done with another huge and amazing book I've been reading non-stop literally for about the last 3-4 weeks and this beginning is catching and interesting enough to have pulled me away from my main read at the moment! That is no small feat! I look forward to reading some more of this story right now and then finish when I'm done with my other book

thanks for the chapter

ah another mage. I would actually be interested in a good assasin novel for once. Noone goes really assasik type

Change the mana regen for one but other then that for your first novel its good so far👍❤️

Interesting start, Mana regen seems incredibly small, if you kept it at the rate rate of .2 instead of .02 it would still take 10 minutes to get 2 mana

very different

Finally a novel that doesn't sound like a 10 year old wrote it. Like is it that hard to not mispell 30 words in a chapter?

i guess the number one job was probably a combination type

I Wouldve Killed

Back ccdw a

Question: What is the difference between Mana and Magic Power?

Thanks 😊

thanks for the chapter! 😊 --whoa! extreme! well, doing it at a higher level of difficulty the second time around is good, but extreme?! insane! 😃

It's great!

Secret code!!!! hahaha

interesting so far

Thx

Thanks for the chapter~🐱