Started off pretty strong, had the makings to be a truly great novel. Yet, it losses it depth and becomes nothing but sex, corny lines, a lot of inside talking/spacing out, and jumping all over the place. Lost interest around chapter 40 and toughes it out to chapter 70 to see if it’d redeem itself; it didnt. If you’re reading this, trust me, save yourself the time and skip over it. Saves you time, coins, and the disappointment of another great story line that turns into pure garbage. Only, because the author focuses more on fillers, then the actual storyline process.

Good so far, but I hope this doesn’t turn into one of those books where the main character spends a whole chapter talkin to himself in his head or one of the ones that take a chapter or two to get out a single thought always over explaining things.

NP. This is by far my favorite novel

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I have given this book a try, I honest have. I read all the way up to chapter one hundred and eight, and could not take the torture anymore. The story line, had everything it needed to be great, and that’s why I kept reading; hoping it would get better. Yet, I was met with a bunch of inner thoughts, and long explanations, over every single thing. I understanding the need to explain, but should it take two to four chapters, just to get a single thought out ? Randy, spent more time pondering, and thinking of every single thing that it becomes dumb and dry super fast. Not to mention that he has to be one of the dummest, if not most naive, Mc’s out there. Once again, I really think the book has what it needs to be great. Only, if you focus more on depth and not unnecessary filter to fill the pages. Example, Hey randy, you’re eating breakfast ? Hey randy, I didn’t expect to see you today? Hey randy, you can now assimilate this crystal core? two to four pages later of randy thinking of how to respond, rambling in his inner thoughts, or trying to make any decision”.

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Crazy chapter

Awesome chaPther

I love this chapter, cant eaut to see what happens next.

Very interesTing fursf ChaPteR

Awesome chapter

🤣🤣🤣🤣 this the funniest chapter by far

Its definitely different from other storylines, With simIlar platforms. Usually, The main character wouldve woken up and realized that hes gone back in time 5,7, or 10 years And starts plannint how to do things different and farm the best equipment, Hidden titles, and achievements