Comments of chapter undefined of In MHA with Star Platinum

good noice also the police shoul be banned and fired for threatening a chil👍🍪

Wait... so he signed a contract to go to hero academy? He? A 16yo boy signed a contract without the knowledge of his parents in a modern world? Talk about ret*rded setup...

Your English is pretty bad... Try some editing or maybe an editor to clean this up.

Hmmmm I am late but I'll share my thoughts nonetheless. It would be best if his character wasn't a complete righteous fool like Midorya or an edgy idiot like Bakugo. More something like a normal chill dude with his own sets of morals. People nowdays like exagerating characters way too much. Keeping it balanced offers such a wide array of choices in terms of plot and longevity for the story

i hate police in MHA to my bones

lmao how is math a weird thing to be taught?

Wonder why people are already judging when it's only the 2nd chapter? This is much better than half the other fanfics I've read out there.

I like where this is going, my only complaint is that you’ll probably need and editor since some of these scentences are really weird. Not to the point of unreadable, just enough that I need to reconstruct the scentence in my head every 5 lines or so

hmm , okay.

This story would be better if it had an editor run through it.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

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I really can't stomach mha so hypocrite world lol.

Parents concent? He’s still a minor?

Não agora ele e obrigado a botar o shape

Me sigue pareciendo raro que no conosca bnha

Wait.. Wasn't he excited to be have a quirk and become a Hero when he was 4. Now that he has a chance.. Why is he acting like this?

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.