Hyowha
I think its a great story but it feels like mc doesn't have any clear plan at all on how to save the world. so far all he's been doing is focusing on himself. example is he's already met the mother of raven and yet he's done nothing to atleast empower her or to guide her on the right path. he already knows she'll turn vengeful at some point but he's done nothing to stop it. he was just like "she can survive far into the future, she can take care of herself now". which he clearly missed some point because her surviving is nonot the issue. it's her being vengful that she became a nuisance in humanity's survival.
sorry if I can't mention any names because i really can't remember Korean or Chinese names that well
Hubris123124:he also ignores the people around him like its nobodies business. hell the least he can do is make the girl childhood friend stronger so she can protect herself. to atleast respect or honor the original persona.
I think you are doing a great job with the story so far! I think it would be cool if he gets team mates to help him fight against the mirage. Or maybe just some interaction wIth someone from the mirage before it arrives. (Its getting close!! I didnt keep track of how many days are left but itll be there soon) Also, are you going to do some romance or something? It seems set up already but it was with his past self so maybe he doesnt feel anything yet? I dont know, its your story and its great so far. Keep up the good work!!
going pretty good so far. The perfect balance of foreshadowing and world-building. Just a couple of things: 1. since his mother was the concubine of all things parallel, I think it would be pretty cool to eventually call him the consort of all things parallel. 2. do you plan on doing any romance or harem? or monogamy. I don't mind either way. cuz he's setting flags with his teacher and childhood friend.
it's progressed nicely up to now. It's also been a unique take on the idea. He didn't reincarnate and immediately jump into this huge plot to save the world and train. He doesn't come off as pretentious either which is a plus. He is living a relatively normal life while waiting for the end to start, it's been fun seeing his normal life and i think it will make for a much better contrast once the Apocalypse starts. So far despite people who also know about it and want him recruited or killed he hasn't clichely fought any big troublesome post apocalyptic organizations or leaders. You have really illustrated the "calm before the storm" very well.
The story was going good but these last few chapter don't really seem to progress the story. What does the underground after school activities having to do with the invasion of the Mirage and the future identity of humanity? I guess you could say character development but there seem to be better ways of doing that.