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Why would he do that?
What did he reply to?
Why would you want that? If you don't got s.th good to say, say nothing.
Either say 'there was a lot more detail' or 'there were a lot more details'.
stick to present or past tense. Don't bounce between both in the same paragraph.
perhaps saying 'he would' rather than 'will' would be more fluent.
Perhaps to should be 'I can not'
lol just reread it
this is a gross over-generalization.
Just wanted to say I like how you accept and appreciate mistakes rather than others who get pissed off or ignore them. Also, it sounds better to put the word “though” before the rest of the sentence. Like this: “though, there might be loot!” But as a native speaker, it’s prolly better to just leave the comma so “there might be loot though!”
Ye I’m out as well. Man’s writing with his emotions rather than his head