Comments of chapter undefined of Fallen Lightbringers' Return

I think the story is progressing nicely, I like when the story unfolds slowly. It helps build up the story. I can’t wait for the world to go upside down and have people awaken their powers.

NO HAREM PLS!! THAT'S ALL. HAHAHA btw the story was veryyyyy veryyyyy gooood like it got me hooked in it's first chapter. The story pace is relevant, not too fast not too slow. I'll support this webnovel everyday for sure!

The story build up was nice. It was good up to this chapter. A bit of sentence rearrangement needed here and there. Keep up the good work.

Story is moving nicely its not moving to fast or to slow

I think you are doing a great job with the story so far! I think it would be cool if he gets team mates to help him fight against the mirage. Or maybe just some interaction wIth someone from the mirage before it arrives. (Its getting close!! I didnt keep track of how many days are left but itll be there soon) Also, are you going to do some romance or something? It seems set up already but it was with his past self so maybe he doesnt feel anything yet? I dont know, its your story and its great so far. Keep up the good work!!

going pretty good so far. The perfect balance of foreshadowing and world-building. Just a couple of things: 1. since his mother was the concubine of all things parallel, I think it would be pretty cool to eventually call him the consort of all things parallel. 2. do you plan on doing any romance or harem? or monogamy. I don't mind either way. cuz he's setting flags with his teacher and childhood friend.

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it's progressed nicely up to now. It's also been a unique take on the idea. He didn't reincarnate and immediately jump into this huge plot to save the world and train. He doesn't come off as pretentious either which is a plus. He is living a relatively normal life while waiting for the end to start, it's been fun seeing his normal life and i think it will make for a much better contrast once the Apocalypse starts. So far despite people who also know about it and want him recruited or killed he hasn't clichely fought any big troublesome post apocalyptic organizations or leaders. You have really illustrated the "calm before the storm" very well.

dull and pointless well as long as it doesn't interrupt his goal to get first

Its nice and its gud

Last few chapters are just fillers he literally said previously that the world is ending so he should fOcus on getting stronger but now he’s getting involved in irrelevant things

The story was going good but these last few chapter don't really seem to progress the story. What does the underground after school activities having to do with the invasion of the Mirage and the future identity of humanity? I guess you could say character development but there seem to be better ways of doing that.