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daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

SO let me Guess now the mc has a Loli princess that could easily destroy his world without Even try ?? Nice XD

MrFeemion
MrFeemionLv5MrFeemion

No i understand that part, im just saying that depending on when she killed Yun Che, (unclarified) jasmine wouldnt be in the pearl as he not has met her. yueli went to pick up and accompany qingyue through the wedding right? the two shouldnt have interacted yet.

daniel_rahn:You arent reading right? I didn't Say he meet her i Say she is in the Pearl with him like it literally Says at the start of the next chapter
Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Lv5Darkstar11051999

Yuechan fuçked up the plot real hard LMFAO

Ryofu
RyofuLv11Ryofu

Thanks for the chapter. I pray that the first recompense he'll get will be something really good, right now the MC is heavily flowed that make it hard to like him.

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1450ShadesOfAss

mc is so lame. im losing motivation to continue this

_LordGrim_
_LordGrim_Lv2_LordGrim_

Lol, I understand that the author didn't read the original, but as someone who knows the canon pretty well, I feel bad. First, the heavenly poison pearl had already merged with Yun Che's body by that time. Second, Yun Che only found the injured Jasmine after the wedding, at night, when he went for a walk. For her survival, Jasmine created a connection between her soul and the soul of the pearl's master. If the pearl didn't merge with the body, then Jasmine would either die or take it for herself. Third, Yuechan knock the soul out of him with her punch? What? I'm more likely to believe that it's just amnesia, albeit with a stretch. I remember that it was already mentioned that the worlds will not always correspond to the novel, but still it is such changes that I do not really like. The idea is really interesting and so far there have been no serious problems that would discourage the desire to read. I hope in the future the author will approach writing more seriously.

bored_mortal
bored_mortalLv11bored_mortal

Great chapter ^^ Great way to deal with yun che LMFAO

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

amcc
amccLv13amcc

Won't jasmine die without the sky poison pearl?

ADD
ADDLv5ADD

I have a feeling that he will end up catching Draig and other gold fingers accidentally in the future

Tempest_Oosuki
Tempest_OosukiLv4Tempest_Oosuki

lol

Seikoku
SeikokuLv5Seikoku

More More More [img=update]

Fex
FexLv4Fex

YES new chapter

Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Lv5Darkstar11051999

Thanks for the chapter and waiting for future updates.

PRiMoRiDiaL
PRiMoRiDiaLLv4PRiMoRiDiaL

Hahahah she accidentally killed the future yunche's soul LOL

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

So because he reacted to their beauty like literally everyone else does she did that? The only exceptions being those who are terrified of her when shes releasing her aura which keeps them from paying attention to her looks. That's bs.

Trollface
TrollfaceLv1Trollface

You know, author, you're trying to make that guy look like a villain. he's not an angel, of course, but you're scum, too. one field of berries.

Qin_Yu_6144
Qin_Yu_6144Lv2Qin_Yu_6144

Ayos to lods, meron na akong nakitang ganto yung concept na novel. Pagpatuloy mo lang lods. Pag maganda na at maayos na yung mga grammar, pwede na gumawa ng patreon.

shiroch
shirochLv3shiroch

Actually I also want to kill yun che

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the chapter

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please 🤩👌