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Comments of chapter undefined of Admin of Girls' Chat Group

venusstarlights
venusstarlightsLv1venusstarlights

No, see ya~

Drake_White
Drake_WhiteLv3Drake_White

Yes Fuck the Plot... give Every protagonist the shower of punches

ultimatefantasy00
ultimatefantasy00Lv4ultimatefantasy00

I'm not really a fan of telling them all that, but lolz on yun che.... well not really, kind of pitiful.

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

Holy shit bro, i really like this concept, please Keep it up, can't wait to see the next chapters 😄

ban_steal
ban_stealLv3ban_steal

-100 point for telling them that they are just a fiction character

Dhaliwal2
Dhaliwal2Lv6Dhaliwal2

Killing Yun Che will f*ck up life of other girls he saved. Jasmine will literally die. I read ATG until Yun Che became evil and never had problem with his character. He kept searching for Yuechan for years and had to go to God realm once again to save other girls. His character was never bad, the problem is author kept throwing multiple girls in danger at same time. He is just one person, how many of his girls is he supposed to save at once anyway? Mars just filled the entire novel with tense moments. Ever since the start of story, Yun Che never got the chance to breathe. He is always running saving this girl or that one. It's like other than putting his girls in danger he didn't know how to write a decent story. So Yun Che honestly care for his girls. He almost died saving Chu Yuechan in dragon God test. He knew that a prideful person like her will kill herself after loosing her cultivation so choose to carry her even if that will make trial even more difficult. He himself doesn't know that he has plot armor, so he was pretty much ready to die if it meant saving Chu Yuechan. Chu Yuechan didn't fall in love with him because he took her virginity, she loved him because how caring he was for her. She saw exactly how far he is willing to go for her. So I can never understand people hating on Yun Che, it's author's fault for writing a plot like that. Did you even read ATG or form a biased opinion from listening to other people?

MsomizerM
MsomizerMLv10MsomizerM

pretty insensitive to just flat out tell them that they are not real

Fayte01
Fayte01Lv4Fayte01

nice more please

royalgrim
royalgrimLv4royalgrim

ok this is droped

XenonNoble
XenonNobleLv11XenonNoble

I need more!

FlamescionTuna
FlamescionTunaLv5FlamescionTuna

yes **** the plot

bored_mortal
bored_mortalLv11bored_mortal

Great chapter ^^

The_Oldest_King
The_Oldest_KingLv3The_Oldest_King

You are all fictional characters, here is the proof. 😒 Seriously? The same shit already tires, nothing realistic. The whole plot and development of the novel in the trash ... bye ~

Yunick
YunickLv5Yunick

aqua is too smart must be a fake

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Michael_Scotts
Michael_ScottsLv4Michael_Scotts

So he just got tha on his phone no problem. Sent it to them with no issue. And in no time all of them went through it. And that's even bs with the cultivator. Its separated into pages so that takes time to go through. While though an assumption, I get she has high comprehension and can likely even easily memorize. However she still has to go through everything she read and theres thousands of chapters. It wouldnt be quick for her either. Shes not THAT high up in cultivation either.

Trollface
TrollfaceLv1Trollface

stupid mc - I automatically quit. also China shi*

Yun_Che_4310
Yun_Che_4310Lv1Yun_Che_4310

0 point, I am out 😞

Alter_naruto
Alter_narutoLv1Alter_naruto

Si a la mierda la trama. Lord kazuma lo aprueba

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the chapter

Master4thWall
Master4thWallLv4Master4thWall

Well, that's new đŸ„ł. Though the words left by Mc is just too bland, it's still not that bad.