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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancients World

Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

that King has to be either completely idiotic or supremely arrogant unless he's working for the dark gods which he probably is

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Dabloid
DabloidLv15Dabloid

Author You're writing aloud instead of allowed

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

ikhmal_24
ikhmal_24Lv11ikhmal_24

Are these 3 guild masters NPC? Since it doesn't make sense as the game had just started.

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DreamedLullaby
DreamedLullabyLv15DreamedLullaby

Thanks for the chapter~🐱

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Atlas_cf43
Atlas_cf43Lv10Atlas_cf43

thanks for the chapter ☺️

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Ezuku
EzukuLv10Ezuku

I'm a little interested in how his family died. I mean everything seems pretty peachy atm🤔😅

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Myriad_Paul_3484
Myriad_Paul_3484Lv15Myriad_Paul_3484

If there is a son of Arch- Angel Michael class then they should be a son or daughter of Seraphim Lucifer (he technically is a Seraphim if you get biblical, and not an arch Angel as he is portrayed in fiction)

Banjohamster
BanjohamsterLv11Banjohamster

i like the Happy moments ! Thank you for your work

Azmodeus_Alice
Azmodeus_AliceLv10Azmodeus_Alice

Umm... Didn't the game just start? Why are these level one noobs talking as if they're about to take down the Kingdom??🤨

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1asdasdssf

Hmm.. I don't these gamers would be so serious right off the bat :D

Kakashi31
Kakashi31Lv11Kakashi31

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Sherine_Mashigo
Sherine_MashigoLv12Sherine_Mashigo

I ll like to read more chapters to get better understanding

cabbage_soup
cabbage_soupLv2cabbage_soup

You have a pretty nice plot for the story author. I just really wish you can edit your chapters, and show rather than tell us readers the characteristics, actions, and background of people/places. I don't want to know that a character is arrogant, I want to see them being arrogant. It's not my place to harp on your writing, so this is just a friendly suggestion :)

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter

Palabasa
PalabasaLv12Palabasa

npc's have their own thing going on..unless the ancient world is actually a separate world/dimension and gamers gets tunnelled to it via the game.

Heavens_Authority
Heavens_AuthorityLv13Heavens_Authority

I'm wondering if the father being sad might be something to come or just that he'd be sad for missing out on pancakes?