Comments of chapter undefined of The Eye of Zeus

This is beautiful,I am visualizing every single moment in my head

Perfect writing👌

Oh goodness, that was intense

OUCH!

AAA THE CLIFFHANGER

good job ending your chapters man cliffhangers

Woah! He better be okay!

Pls update abeg🙏

Wow, the comments seem a little one sided… I almost feel like I clicked on the wrong story to leave a comment. Not really feeling it. The story isn’t bad yet… but it’s not good yet either. At this point I don’t have enough content or context to really form a strong opinion either way. If anything, I’m a little frustrated at the abrupt situation… it’s chaos before I know what’s what. All the talking about a father and his linking of some dream (which may or may not be related to the scene with Zeus) and his possible father figure. 🤷🏻‍♂️Now he’s running from a guy who has blue eyes… much like his own (& many others). It may allude to him being the much anticipated father or it could have simply been an extra random detail the author gave us to describe the odd man.