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Comments of chapter undefined of In Bleach with a System!

itaymars
itaymarsLv2itaymars

nice , i hope you can get him to become a Shinigami with ichigo before he leaves to soul society

Poseidonz
PoseidonzLv1Poseidonz

this chapter just felt weird to me, i got the feeling that he is gonna be more like neutral evil from the synopsis, and he should've already known how weak he is compared to them, i mean he knows bankai exist so him risking his life like that is just not logical even if he knows urahara will save him, so just to make sure is he just doing all this "i'm gonna risk my life for you" for benefits or is he seriously giving his life for people he met just a few days ago. also ichigo is the hot blooded idiot, don't make him like that. he should've known when to give up not trying to stand up to them when he is in his death door.

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KindaWeirdChampBro
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One last thing, since we are approaching the Soul Society arc, i would like to know on where most of you stand regarding the strength of most captains. Let's say that base form Aizen is 100/100 What would you rate strength wise the other Gotei 13 captains? Remember tham i'm asking about their CURRENT strength. Also, don't include Kenpachi in that vote because... Well, he's Kenpachi.

I_Am_Noice
I_Am_NoiceLv1I_Am_Noice

realization was made overtly dramatic and frustrating, people read ffs to ease up their mind, not to tense it up, keep it interesting, not frustrating. If MC was even a little smart, he would have known the difference between him and byakuya and trained instead of coming to do the service of being weakened and injured, his gains would have been much better, and he wouldn't have been injured for nothing.

Mr_carefree
Mr_carefreeLv3Mr_carefree

This chapter... I don't really like it. It goes against his shown personality. Also it was unnecessary as it shows him to the soul reaper society. I want to comment on the rukia choice but I won't since its not my story but I find her annoying and suspect the main reason people in the story flock to her is the power within her is passively influencing everyone on her want of attention and recognition from family, friends, and work employees

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YgNear
YgNearLv3YgNear

Thanks 😁

Daemanuel
DaemanuelLv4Daemanuel

Pls ,just pls dont make him like this! No one just no. We are not more kids are like this bullshit powerfriendship or lovepower. 🤮🤮🤮🤮😷🤢🤢🤢🤢It made me sick just reading this chapter. Make him more baddass ,wolf like, just going for power, Girls and knowlodege. You can make him have Friends and more, but not like this. I Saw Bleach a few times until now, i LOVE It, but i rly dont like this kind of actitud. In my opinión IS like a child. More mature. Why act like a dumb ass when you know what Will happen. Just because want to be Closer to main character? Who decide this? If Ichigo in this world is blessed by i dont know Fate or the world, this dosent mind you cant change It. You have a omnipotent system and knowlodege about the future you can change Fate as you wish. Dont be a bich like Avances for Nick Fury xD. Im not blaming you, just saying. Continúe as you wish i Will read...for now XD

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Dereck_Oliveira
Dereck_OliveiraLv3Dereck_Oliveira

Well author, you make me proud. It's rare to have novels that are good, even more fanfics, so thank you for writting it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, hope you never stop. Have my stones.

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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

I never understood why the hogyoku was never noticed until fire chicken tries killing her. I would assume our genius candy shop owner would realize something is fishy, even though it was Rukia's brother picking her up.

sailesh0
sailesh0Lv2sailesh0

Hey,pls don't make mc Ichigo's sidebitch.We have enough of mcs who will aid canon characters for shit

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Shadoww332
Shadoww332Lv5Shadoww332

Just so you know, you have the hidden quest of meeting Byakuya and Renji happening twice.

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Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5Holy_Roon

well thanks for the great chapter

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Nicolas1199
Nicolas1199Lv6Nicolas1199

Thanks for the chapter I think that everything with the chapter was right and made sense, the only thing that I don't understand is why the MC was so relieved (at least enough to start smirking) when Ichigo arrived

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Unique_Sovereign
Unique_SovereignLv15Unique_Sovereign

Thanks for the chapter. It was bound to happen at some point on where the characters realize how weak they are and how strong the opponent is. That way, it can motivate them to get stronger.

Loyalscum
LoyalscumLv13Loyalscum

is the mc just going to be a another goody two shoes like all the other character because that's boring. if the mc is all good then the story just going to turn an exact copy if the original story with the only difference being 1 extra character that has little to no impact at all. I understand that the mc wants to get stronger to survived in the bleach world but if he just wanted to survive the he could have moved to any other town in the world since apparently nothing ever happens anywhere else. So I make a proposition why doesn't the mc spread the knowledge of spiritual powers and increase the spiritual powers inside of everyone on the planet officially making fullbringers mainstream. he does this because he wants to give people the choice to become food or to fight back against horrifying monsters that they can not see. this hive the opportunity to bring in a lot of new charactes and change the story heavily. evil people will pop up no double but who cares the mc shouldnt be all good anyway. it will make this interesting. this will allow him to bold an organization and have his own arc instead of following others around like you are currently doing.

Darth_foreskin
Darth_foreskinLv4Darth_foreskin

why didn't he upgrade his reiatsu like 2 times? I would think anyone would do that when anticipating a fight with byakuya of all people even knowing how strong he his. it just felt like you made this scene with the express purpose of making him equal to ichigo. please don't do that.

Vincent_Kun
Vincent_KunLv4Vincent_Kun

just want him to get strong fast with his system, not the usual powerup that protagonist from animes have

Timelesstrix
TimelesstrixLv6Timelesstrix

idk what impact the MC's having on the story... he seems like he'd get sidelined like Chad, orihime and ishida

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izumi_miyamura
izumi_miyamuraLv6izumi_miyamura

Bom cap

flavko_supreme
flavko_supremeLv4flavko_supreme

Why didn’t he use his fullbring to make rule to put the fight in his favor why give it to him if he’s not gonna use it

vtkun
vtkunLv5vtkun

why not utilize the fullbring ? if he wanted to lose he should not even go