Comments of chapter undefined of Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
Fnatic_Fan
Chapter comments39
Not to sure whether it was too fast or not - it didn't really feel rushed so it is OK I think. I think Manipulating Hormones or Manipulation as it was brought forward by other comments isn't a good idea, because it destroys the current way of relationship development which is a lot of the non-sexual content
Dont sell yourself short author! Your doing a great job and I always wait patiently for a new chapter. I am in awe that you came back swinging very hard with your creativity. To be creative and to fuel it for writing is no easy task. I have been there whilst in a slump aka writers block. I have enjoyed this chapter immensely, My only complaints aren't really good one they are quite comical. "Its too short!" Your descriptions and pacing thus far are at a good steady pace, if its works then no change is really needed. Overall good job on this chapter! Thank you for going through so many revisions, the honesty of your work shines brightly.
I enjoyed the chapter. My recommendation is to also develop romance along with physical relations. So far, there is only one girl that was taken on that route, so even tho MC has been manipulative, i hope he can be more honest. From Aerin i only saw reluctance and apprehension, and acting as if suddenlyz everything became innapropriate, seemingly doing a 180 from her past self.I also want to see the MC feeling emotions, not just faking them, since he gives off the impression of a pathological liar, when he shouldn't be. I want to see him acting possessive, loving, and caring, instead of just going for their bodies through manipulations. It seems as if the only thing he cares about is the physical aspect, with no regard for the emotional one. I bet he would be fine if he was hated by everyone as long as he could touch them, so it makes him appear superficial to the core.
Great chapter, many thanks! I think it'd be cool if we could read more about Aerin's thoughts about Malriel's actions, like what she feels, thinks. Her, being embarassed, flustered, but trying to keep face in front of Malriel is really nice thing to delve in. Maybe you could spoil her and make some really lewd thoughts :D.
So far my only complaint about this novel is that I don’ know where it is going aside from a Slice of life. Maybe that’a all it will ever be. But I feel with the lore introduced, it has a lot more potential for Maelriel to develop other abilities which could be so nice. Like summoning monsters and controlling them with his music or beast taming. Some more action. I don’t think I need to tell you against mind control and so on, because the sort of author you are. You won’t do it. What I expect at this point is more interaction between Mother, sister and teacher.
Perfect, I loved this chapter, the MC got a nice reward, as always using his wits and is well on his way to evolving this relationship wherever he wants. Now I look forward to the next chapter with the second part of the reward ˉ̡̠̭̭”( ⑉¯ །། ¯⑉ )ˉ̡̠̭̭” . Thanks for the chapter, don't worry about the chapter being late and do it in your time, no pressure mate d(-_☆)
