Up to date review. I challenge the author to write one single chapter without using the words Monster, mother and son. The word monster is used so often and so cheaply that it made it meaningless. It became a term without any value. Also, the mother son relationship is forced in such a disgusting way that it's not even funny. No emotion put into writing, just dragged out sh....it. A good novel became washed up, milked through meaningless and dragged out chapters with repetitive content. Characters are all the same, with pathetic developments. Same character, same behaviour and same attitude. Nothing fun in the novel anymore, you can feel the burn out and tiredness in every single line. The writing style tries to be similar to MTW, but only comes out as cheap and recycled due to the repetitiveness. Yes, i am serious. Yes, i mean it. Yes, yes yes whatever you want to insert to reiterate all i said previously. Soooo tired... such low quality it's not even funny anymore.

Hmm.. I was always curious about this, but how did Ning Zuye have a kid when she always kept her distance from people and men in general? If she seems sheltered and withdrawn now, i can only imagine how she could have been in the past, and yet she has a daughter?.. Feels weird now that i think about it.

Yeah she was, brutally and cruelly.. And i have a feeling she is his current mother somehow. It's not even the first time she had such a fate in past lives.

I hope these flashbacks won't be too long. They're not as interesting as the story itself, and nothing really exciting is going on. Tbh, Xu Mei's past doesn't interest me much, and i never liked this format in the previous novel either. It disconnects the reader from the present, cutting off the flow of the story. Especially when reading so many chaps of past stuff that don't really matter much.

This guy is too honest.

I said, not as important. Knowing how strong a god is at this point will not change the story much. Because, he is too weak for even intelligence to work. Whether before that chap or after that chap, if a God wanted to erase him and his people, he could only beg another god for help, while his intelligence would be worthless. What i want to see, is him actually growing so he can handle things himself. Let alone defending against a God, he can't even escape one. So knowing at this point how strong a god is doesn't help him. He wasn't that reckless in the first place. In fact, it creates an inconsistency i would say, since White Flame was pathetic on a level i can't begin to explain, whith same Omni body. Even if his divine power was low, he had an indestructible body and got manhandled like a chump instead. So, no, knowing how strong Gods are doesn't help much at this point, since in any possible way, MC could never have done anything about it, even if he was Einstein himself. What would help, would be for Orion to stop being a politician, and focus more on training, since he grows so slow that he basically stagnates by this point. I can't believe the little focus there is on that, with his talent. Also, I am sure that with or without that fight, everyone was sure that nobody in the village could handle a god even if they all fought together. We can imagine the scale of power when it comes to gods ourselves, without seeing them fight. It's not like they're a new concept.

Kind of a pathetic chapter. I can see the faceslap attempts here, but i can only say it looks shallow to me. From the begining, it feels like MC is forced to be too many things. Also, he's only 6 years old or something? Some more time could pass for MC to actually get some benefits, instead of dragging things out at this point. For some reason, i feel like he won't get much rewards from his sister... As if the highest heir of the clan would never get resources. I can feel many events that won't make sense just to somehow drag the story along.

Because the fight was simply too long. Also, MC is too weak, not even rank 2 vylkr... So fighting gods is impossible even for his grandpa at this point, hence, not as important for now. Idk when he will grow, but he needs to be Rank 5 for any of those fights.. he is powerless trash compared to the strong since chap 1.

I mean.. These should be memories that show the past and solve some mysteries, but instead we read almost 2 chaps about some boring random fight that doesn't help with anything. Feels like instead of following the main flow of the memories, we start with side stories that don't mean much.

Turn off your brain, author isn't using it either.

Funny how he hasn't gained anything from her espera training. Author probably wants to force some pathetic events for MC, so he will k1ll the logic in the novel. I can smell the developments from here. Turn off your brain guys, random stuff will happen

So she too got R-worded?

Ahh so Ning Zuye is a sister or something of Ning Xue? Would be nice if she became MC's woman too.. poor beauty got the least amount of attention so far.

I get that, but, my point is that a Law of Death doesn't increase your awareness, mental capacity, speed, strength. It allows you to end things and people. His foundation is still his cultivation. And strictly based on foundations, Tang Yin is 100x above him. He took one of Yin's strongest hits with his bare body, unprotected by a Law. Why was he not turned into mush? Cause at some points, the laws were eliminated, and MC landed hits with his top power. A Law doesn't give speed if it's not the law of speed. or strength if it's not the law of strength. So the concept of Death shouldn't make his body, speed and awareness stronger. Whatever it is, a level 10 can't fight a level 100 if that's all you compare. Cancel the death law with control, and lvl 100 should hit like 100 on lvl 10, which is 1 shot. This is my logic here.. If every Law allowed someone to reinforce themselves in all aspects then what would be the point of cultivation? So, that's why it doesn't make sense to me. The way you wrote the fight was inconsistent and lacking in logic.

Perhaps, but he's been shown to be similar to Yang wei in some ways, so i was worried.

As long as you don't introduce washed up socks of Shen Bao or some Harem of his. I don't do well with comparing chars and painting others as MC's for real MC to catch up to.

You should.. too much chinese man.. i always confuse them. So Xinyue is the strongest matriarch. With Menglong being the silent icy one?

Man.. i always confuse them. Is Ling Meyan the disciple of one of the matriarchs? In same generation as Liu Yan? And Xinyue the 3rd, Huiran 2nd and Menglong the 1st matriarch?... These names are so confusing.

One thing is to not go for cliches, another to completely ignore the gap in cultivation realms. Like.. How can the heir even see Tang Yin? And how can Tang Yin not see every movement of the heir? A Law acts on the concept it represents, it doesn't magically make you faster, stronger, etc... or boost your mental capacity. What is even cultivation? Just ammassing spiritual power? That's flimsy..

Hmm? Is it that shen bao guy thay menglong bangs again?..