Comments of chapter undefined of Black Market Merchant

Your English is quite poetic and descriptive, however, the more I read into the chapter, the more I regret reading the synopsis. I wish to discover Lisa's back story and this world's specificities along the way rather than in one go at the beginning. It spoils a lot of the juicy stuff.

Nice chapter

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i like this chapter. give me an unexpect moment 😁🔥🔥

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Same cool vibes as this guy from trigun

I could literally picture the fight choreographed in my head. I'm a complete newb author but even I can tell this is amazing. You're able to project a vivid image into your audiences head using just words and that's something special.

I am already impressed. It is well-written and has an interesting premise. Looks like it's gonna be a long one, though! :p

thats my girl 😎

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Nice. Actions are everywhere. I started to like her character. Curious about what's going to happen next chapter.