Comments of chapter undefined of Embers Ad Infinitum

Embers Ad Infinitum

Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

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Lion_styloLv6Lion_stylo

this story seems all over the place. one paragraph cuts to the next without any continuity or bridges. jumping from character and scene to another just like (snaps) that feels somewhat uninteresting. can't concentrate on s scene of it's 5 second pulses of each story and there are 10 at the same time

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DarkdelusionLv6Darkdelusion

Abusive relationship where one wants to f*ck and the other wants to hide. Ceo/Emperor 'romance' novels, is that you?

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DrafyLv13Drafy

Qiao Chu saved himself with only foreplay for now :)

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ic4ru577Lv14ic4ru577

monsters with built in on off switch. thx u CK for the chapter

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MuteLv13Mute

Anyone reading this able to tell me what the power levels are like so far? Just humans with cybernetic enhancements or are they actually powerful?

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WiseTreeLv7WiseTree

Thanks

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Mr_ShangLv13Mr_Shang

thanks for the chapter~

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othergeorgebushLv14othergeorgebush

Echo

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KristLv3Krist

Luigi

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Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

tyvm

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Dr_WhiteLv14Dr_White

Thanks!

3yr

CloudstrifeLv7Cloudstrife

Kool chap... thx a ton

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jubjicLv7jubjic

Thanks

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Tyrannical_BookLv3Tyrannical_Book

thanks for chapter

3yr