Comments of chapter undefined of The Only Aura User In Magic World

This dude recovered really fast from his sudden rebirth... it's almost freaky

What a chaotic start... way too rushed and forced. You just shove all this content down your readers throat, but forget to go knto more detail on some other parts. Also I find the decisions of this MC lacking some serious logic. Why go back to a school when he visited it in his last life? He is an orphan „nobody cares about“, so who is gonna check on him if he really wasted his time in some school? A lot of info is just missing, like what kind of technological standards are there or how can he ride a carriage without money(he didn‘t, but it apparently was an option, before he decided to run home)? How did he hunt a rabbit? Do you seriously insinuate that a teenager is able to catch a wild rabbit with his hands and a little knife? Do you have any idea how fast and agile a wild rabbit is? All in all, not a very promising start..

I haven't thought of air element usage of breathing underwater.... that's a first for me. I thought it's some kind of mutated wind element

looks decent for first chapter except for two things MC doesn't care about his rebirth.... why him? how? why at this timeline? why 2 magic elements... he also isn't inquisitive to try his magic.... also why return to village if he is orphan and no 1 takes care of him? I doubt he has any belongings with him at home. he is poor next is grammar. it is pretty ok except at few places. wrong usage of -ed especially

Plus, work on the speech/author. Who is talking when? Is he talking to himself when he says, "Now is my second magical element?" I found it difficult to understand and this spoils the reader experience when you don`t know whether it is the English or the author.

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too rushed and chaotic story no point in half the things you have written... air element for example it can't be that as u say air is a separate element and then also no genius has ever made gains/research on it..... the mc hunted 🐇 and then he goes to sleep ? how what about prey just let it be there ...lol it'll start rotting in ur house... STOP RUSHING AND REREAD ALL THE POINTS IN THE CHAPTERS PLEASE

Also, quit the use of stupid tropes like the guy having a `useless` element like Air. It really tells us how much thought you put into your work, what to expect, the other tropes you will possibly throw at us, and how much we should invest into your story.

every sentence just feels fast for some reason. just speedrunning right through everything it feels like

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Needs work on grammar and tenses. Then explaining the Aura bit; he cannot have been the only physical cultivator since talent goes across the spectrum. Someone before him should have seen the futility of magical cultivation and chosen an Aura path. You cannot retcon and say he did not know this because there must have been records and for someone that was a failure as a magical cultivator he must have done some research. So, re-write, no take-backsies.

uff, I'm sorry but I just can't continue. This needs some serious editing.

Author this is a badly written story, sorry to say this but it really is just not that good. The conception the story is good but the writing is very poor, it’s rushed and you really lack imagery and the explanation of important factors. What did the awakening look like, reactions and the lack of length to the story aspects. You are jumping too fast in between the points of story progression. The concept idols great but execution not so great Mr. author.

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chaotic intro