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Author this is a badly written story, sorry to say this but it really is just not that good. The conception the story is good but the writing is very poor, it’s rushed and you really lack imagery and the explanation of important factors. What did the awakening look like, reactions and the lack of length to the story aspects. You are jumping too fast in between the points of story progression. The concept idols great but execution not so great Mr. author.