Black Sky
I feel like the author simply didn't want to or was too lazy to write the beginning portion of the novel and it's becoming increasingly annoying to read...
Wow šÆ i thout it was good narration in my opinion I dont like useless talk like some novel or manga characters do. so this novel is meant for people like me and if u really dont like this novel pls Dont hate it because i dont want the person that write this magnificent novel to think it is horrible writing i dont hate the novelsthat i dont like so just chill and look at the bright side š
I love the concept but between āsupernaturalā being added before every other relatively important thing and the frankly confusing jump here, I think Iām gonna drop this. I love the idea of a tanky mage story but this story just drops you in six months after the fact. They say his school mostly accepts affluent families. How did he get in? We miss so many details that I feel would make this better. Some might argue that weāve already seen this sort of thing countless times, but itās hard to get a grasp of the story when itās just shoved in our face: Iāve been in this world for 6 months after transmigrating. I have an adoptive father, donāt ask how that happened. I have a Lvl 6 pharmacy technique. How and when did that happen? Donāt ask. What does the system even do? Figure it out from me saying I trained with the passive system. How did I get in this fancy academy? Did I use my adoptive fatherās connections with the baron to get in? Maybe youāll find out in future chapters, maybe you wonāt. How did I get my hands on some soft armor made of pretty expensive metal alloy? It happened, donāt worry. There are just so many questions that seem they should have been answered in chapters leading up to these first 3. If it gets better, then good for those that keep reading, but this start is just too jarring for me to brush it off.
Needs editing desperately. Also, kid is presented in this chapter as being an alchemical genius, a great magician, and a superior fighter. So, instead of a nice progression montage, we come in after he's already leagues ahead of his contemporaries. Perhaps I'm being overly harsh, but I really don't recommend this story. Dropping it here.