Comments of chapter undefined of Tanky Mage System
Tanky Mage System
Black Sky
Chapter comments26
I love the concept but between ‘supernatural’ being added before every other relatively important thing and the frankly confusing jump here, I think I’m gonna drop this. I love the idea of a tanky mage story but this story just drops you in six months after the fact. They say his school mostly accepts affluent families. How did he get in? We miss so many details that I feel would make this better. Some might argue that we’ve already seen this sort of thing countless times, but it’s hard to get a grasp of the story when it’s just shoved in our face: I’ve been in this world for 6 months after transmigrating. I have an adoptive father, don’t ask how that happened. I have a Lvl 6 pharmacy technique. How and when did that happen? Don’t ask. What does the system even do? Figure it out from me saying I trained with the passive system. How did I get in this fancy academy? Did I use my adoptive father’s connections with the baron to get in? Maybe you’ll find out in future chapters, maybe you won’t. How did I get my hands on some soft armor made of pretty expensive metal alloy? It happened, don’t worry. There are just so many questions that seem they should have been answered in chapters leading up to these first 3. If it gets better, then good for those that keep reading, but this start is just too jarring for me to brush it off.
Needs editing desperately. Also, kid is presented in this chapter as being an alchemical genius, a great magician, and a superior fighter. So, instead of a nice progression montage, we come in after he's already leagues ahead of his contemporaries. Perhaps I'm being overly harsh, but I really don't recommend this story. Dropping it here.
