Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

By explaining the events with the rules being noted as to what is allowed, and how the combatants are following , or not, the rules is done nicely . As a reader I don't mind your writing style, or feel the chapter is too long. The story is flowing very smoothly and is easy to understand. Great job, keep it up I will make comments on typos , or a sentence structure that I notice could be smoother, yet everything is reading pretty well .

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