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The gentle cold winds gave a sharp contrast to the Sun's warmth
The gentle cold winds gave a sharp contrast to the Sun's warmth
Instead of calling it a rest room, call it a tea room, a visiting room, or even a parlor room. Here in the United States a rest room is the same as a bathroom or water closet
With the advancement of the civilization , the GSE, the Goblin race is going to lose once again. The Naraku hive fleet will be eliminated, I predict, by the GSE, and the Iron Horde will become another vassal once Eric takes over once again. perhaps the Iron Horde will be sent to the Andromeda galaxy to terraform the stripped planets and expand the GSE's territory that way as well
Ok, that'd be like me using American ghetto slang to communicate with someone who only speaks and understands Japanese
Cooks, shoemakers, tailors,
You would think that since he's from a future time line that he'd know about, and possibly understand, how to construct a water wheel to power a hammer system that works off the spinning of a drive shaft to leather belts driving a crank shaft to pulp the wood into paper.
I'm amazing, aren't I?
It's spelled "Marquis" not Marchesses.
6,000,000 points ? I've noticed that the numbers are odd looking in where the commas have been placed
human-faced tree's description.
giving off a SciFi vibe the abbreviation of SIFI isn't correct
With the reward system making the quests for rewards so simple you would think that the rules, or steps, to accomplish the quest would be listed. Such as the "good" deed quest. Obviously giving up your seat for a pregnant woman, or an elderly person, should be rewarded. The list should include what steps you need to finish to complete the quest
Isn't it hilarious how anyone reading this story can jump to concluding that the main character is supposedly an independent song writer when you clearly illustrate their limitations? And then they question why the main character isn't writing new independent songs!! It's like they haven't even been reading the story!
When you are using the word ascend in a sentence there is no need for the word up. To ascend is to steadily rise, hence the meaning of the word.