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DillonCS1mthCommentedyou've literally been eaten alive by the goblin
It was a very painful death, and Dilan didn't even want to imagine how bad it must be to be eaten alive.- DillonCS2mthCommented
respectably wise
Xiao Yingcheng's face twisted, but he closed his eyes and sat down, taking a deep breath. He forcibly suppressed the rage in his heart but his voice still trembled: "Second Uncle, you know that Ming'er is our meticulously cultivated genius. He is the future of the Xiao Family. Now he is dead at the hands of a nameless person, right under our noses. I can't bear it. Second Uncle, I am now only full of anger and hatred, and not suitable to make decisions. You arrange it!" - DillonCS3mthCommented
im so sick of reading the words "crimson eyes" jeezuss
'Lily⌠that's his weakness⌠his vulnerability,' thought Alisha. If she could somehow get to Lily, she would have Arthur under her feet. The only problem was⌠she was terrified of his crimson eyes and the gaze he directed towards her. - DillonCS7mthReplied to Ryurial
- DillonCS7mthCommented"Long live the Son of God!"
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then how did people see the buffs above his head with the exact details and direction đ´
Lu Yang was not worried about the problem of getting too much-unwanted attention. The game was close to reality. The players neither had a health bar nor a name on their head. If they did not add each other as friends, they would not know who the person in front of them was. Even if someone was unhappy that he had become the number one on the level rankings, no one would be able to find him in the sea of people of over ten million players. - DillonCS1yrCommented
he was just a 14 year old kid... give any 15 year old with a severe inferiority complex infinite power and see what will happen. it's immaturity. no need to ruin his life forever..
As such, he decided to directly cripple him. - DillonCS1yrCommented
this may be a hot take but whenever a trial read opens with something like this you can tell its gonna be bad
Seven Star Province, Red Tiger Sect. - DillonCS1yrCommented
how tf does punching strengthen th3 body. why tf couldn't they have just had him do like push-ups or something from earth
He pushed aside the vines and walked out of the cave, taking a deep breath of the fresh air after the rain. Then, he stood on a huge rock and began to practice a set of fist techniques that strengthened his body. - DillonCS1yrCommented
I thought It was his girlfriend?
Zhang Qi had a loose mouth, so if he found out how great of a wizard Zhao Xu was, he would make sure that the entire class found out so he could show his friend off. - DillonCS1yrCommentedCh 175 First Segment. (Part-3)
- DillonCS1yrCommentedCh 172 Round-3 Commences.
- DillonCS1yrCommentedCh 171 Significance of a higher Grade 'Physique'.
- DillonCS1yrReplied to DeadpanDeme
possibly but thats defintely something really important for the story telling, if thats the case its not something that should be left out and left for readers to infer on their own y'know
Time passed quickly as autumn turned to winter. Su Jie was then fourteen-years-old.detailMy Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial ArtsEastern ¡ I'm Really Not Xu Xian - DillonCS1yrReplied to DeadpanDeme
idk what to tell you I was reading this when it was a trail read :P I didnt see any of this maybe its just a shared sentiment lol
Remaining Lifespan: 47 YearsdetailMy Clones Cultivated Low Grade Martial Arts Until They Became Immortal Martial ArtsEastern ¡ I'm Really Not Xu Xian - DillonCS1yrCommented
I was confused until I saw you were going for the narrator style, I really like the premise, extremely so, I entirely want this to succeed, my biggest problem is that even if it is narrator pov the entire chapter was telling us what was happening not showing us, its like instead of reading a story ourselves we are just hearing about it from someone else that read it, we aren't actually getting anything from it but info dumps and its not interesting because we aren't to get any expression from the content, its just information of what a character does. Maybe everything I said is wrong and im just not appreciating it properly, I only wish to leave this here because I really like the concept, and it can be totally ignored, I will continue reading and this turns out the best :)
Ch 1 Overpowered Newbie - [ Chapter - 1 ] - DillonCS1yrCommented
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"Tsk!" Lin Ye smooths down his shirt. "Women! What unreasonable creatures! When they know they can't win, they start to threaten you. Your kind has no morals at all!" - DillonCS1yrCommented
first off, what could that possibly mean, second off, just awful logic discarding skills like that, especially ones that are his main source of single target short cooldown damage, and ones that level up with you each level making it useful regardless of level, I hate this skill system in this novel, its like it was written by someone who's never play an rpg before
'Healing Spell? Even dogs don't use that garbage! Just be a warehouse manager, and don't waste my mana!' - DillonCS1yrCommented
tf is a "genius professional"
For Lin Ye, who was a genius professional with a bug-like talent... - DillonCS1yrCommentedCh 163 Source of Contract Scrolls.