Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of The Anti God

Sigh. None of these promises matter. If he fulfills them and she gets free she could just swat him like an ant after all his hard work. He's just as naive and stupid as he used to be. He should sign a contract.

Alright, until I finish reading this and write a review, this will be the last critical thing I say. I'll preface it by saying that I honestly do love the story. The issue is that there are so many issues regarding the prose. Tenses are frequently exchanged or misused, the point of view shifts without warning and the use of exposition is tiring. Sometimes it feels like exposition is crammed into the story for the sake of making clear what the author wants the reader to understand, but at inappropriate times. It's okay for the reader to not know everything that's happening, its okay for the reader to discover the world at the same time as the characters. I'm still reading because the story has grabbed me. I'm thoroughly enjoying this, but the host of mistakes work to impede my immersion in this awesome world the author has created. With fine tuning, this could be one of the best cultivation fictions that i'd ever have seen. Alright, that's my last critical word until I read the chapters currently available, now I'll just focus on enjoying the story.

This world is no free free. All comes to a price. Only what matters if you willing to pay that or not

awesome ... I wonder how O.P he become. lol and my boy going on a mission.

Hmm she said her fleshly body was destroyed....just like the lady at the end of chapter one....I hope we don’t have to wait 500-1000 chapters to find out what the deal with everything from the first chapter is.

Thx for the chap

Thx for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Gold

Answer to Author's Thought- Only Free Lunch You will get from none other than your Parents in this world.

I hope Sofie dies

imma go out on a limb and guess Sophia was manipulating him shes now SUS NUMERO UNO

🐲😈👿😜🐒🍪💁

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Cool so they’re able to evolve with him hope to maybe see them upgrade to something better fown the line