Comments of chapter undefined of Mason Aves: The Wizard [DROPPED]
Mason Aves: The Wizard [DROPPED]
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Ty awesome book Maybe a mixture of both, like skip 1st, 2nd and 3rd year. 1-3 chaps for the rest of the years just detailing a few things then skipping again only giving small bits of info about what happened and what he learned Just me trying to give feedback if you want to do something else it's fin
If there is a certain even that is important you could focus on that for a chapter or two. As for his school years in general maybe a chapter per years, like a summery of interesting things he has learned, about the world or magic he has mastered and is practicing. Friends and relationship he has forge over the years, would be fun to learn it would help to flesh out the MC, also any investment he's undertaken in either money or politics.
Thank you for another excellent chapter. And I think you can skip a few years with a summary of the year. I would be curious to see what he specializes in though, whether heâs really good at Transfiguration, charms, and or potions. If heâs multi talented, and if his power has any particular spikes as he grows. Considering his mental talents, I would imagine I will be able to pick up spells rather quickly, especially considering the mastery has over languages now. Also, pointing out his electives and third year will be important, runes and arithmetic is my suggestion, or at the very least runes. Another suggestion on my part is for him to look into a few specialties, making sure to learn things like space expansion germs, healing spells, and a large variety of defense and attack spells. I think his big focuses in preparation for the upcoming war should be healing spells and dueling. Learning many defensive and attack spells under the heading of dueling as well, but making sure he learns not to be restricted by any usual rules or etiquette that happens in the dueling circuit, knowing he should fight dirty when he needs to. Runes, spells, and curses would be a great repertoire of knowledge in order to make any home he lives in very safe and dangerous to break in, and if he makes any safe houses, he can make sure that if they are ever attacked, the enemy suffers dearly for it. And even if he doesnât have a talent and potions, he should at least make a focus of knowing how to make a few important healing potions and the truth serum potion. another branch of magic I would be curious about is how the dark arts affects an individual in this world, and some stories itâs just another form of magic, corrupting only to those who are already leaning towards a sadistic streak, and other stories the magic itself is corrupting. Considering the many useful spells like fiendfire, bone breakers, and dark cutting curses, if the magic itself is not inherently corrupting, it would definitely be a very useful branch of magic to learn to use and defend against.
About timeskip: I guess, the mix of two options would be great. For 3 first years we can just have a small compilation of what he learned, what happened, overall things about Hogwarts and his relationships with people/ghosts(Helena) there - 1 chapter for this would be enough, I think. And than 2-3 chapters for year is fine, I guess?
well, he's indeed young and there's no notable happening in few years. plot started (on britain) when the scales of war climbing high and dumbledore succeeded in destroying his blood pack (whatever it's called) with grindelwald. he can study in school peacefully (gaining all power he can). so yeah, you can skim his early years and maybe add a bit of adventure in or whatever interest you (came to mind).
