Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn In KnB with Skills

If I may.. From another aspiring author, in basketball as well, you need to think better about the scenarios. Think hard as a reader, the person that you are directing your story to. Some people might like the story the way it is, but for me, I see more potential to it.. The situation with the dad teaching him, for example. He took out of nowhere that he is a great Japanese basketball player. Some explanation about that would be cool. Then there was the situation with the kids. It felt like you sped things a little bit too much. If instead of playing the 1v1 directly after, couldn't you show his father giving the tips with more details? That would certify his background, as well as bringing the 1v1 in a more-welcoming way. If you wanted to take him for a "learn in action" type of character, it still could be done better.. these are just some ways, no hate to the author. Just something I would like to have before I realized I fuucked up my own story..

It's a little difficult using a 3 year old body to dribble between the legs due to the height and length of the hands. because when I was kindergarten and for the first time playing basketball, it was difficult to get through the gap between the two legs to dribble because of the small gap

I like a little bit of slice of life (emphasis on a little) because it helps to deepen the characters a little bit, in addition to providing a change of pace that is sometimes welcome

First hehehe, thanks for the Chapter! I have vaccation soon and Corona doesn't make it easier to have fun so this will help me a lot ;) . Well, I am not good at slice of life and I personally prefer Action over slice of life . The only time I prefer slice of life is when Esdeath is involved 😍😍

Hii Author here~ I just wanted to say that today the another chapter will be release, I have a lot of chapters to post and I can make 3 chapters in a day at most, so please rate my work to make me want to continue writing for you

Thanks

thanks for the chapter

Can you say the length in centimeters?

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