DukeNeaffy
hello author it is great hear from you again, and I have to say that I am happy that you would be adding some background to the main character, it just seemed a little hollow (no pun intended) in comparison to the other characters in the story that already have well known backgrounds in the story already. but other than that I would say that the story is a great idea and cant wait to see what you add to it.
The only thing I ask is that you respect the source material. In names like "Hueco Mundo" or "Las Noches" (you often write Los Noches, which is completely incorrect) or any other Spanish(hollow theme) name. Would be appreciated if you take the same respect for German names (Quincy Theme). That been said, I enjoyed your plot a lot and I'm expecting good progress on your skills as a writer. Will follow the new updates in the future.
Looking forward to it! Just an idea: Make it so the MC is reborn before the Quincy first invasion, before the creation of the Gotei 13, si she can make Hueco Mundo as or more powerful than Soul Society. If Arrancar could reproduce like humans or souls, they could have a real society. Imagine a school for Arrancar, to form Espada. Sorry, I'm rambling, but just think about it