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RMtya

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  • RMtya
    RMtya3mth
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    Thanks for the chapter! There is something like Damien's "stealth mode" in the manga. It's called "Observation Killing". "Observation Killing" is an advanced technique of Conquerors Haki which allows for the control of one's own aura or presence, negating an opponent's ability to see into the future or fell the user's presence. Shanks and Rayleigh can use it.

    Ch 45 [45] Caged Bird
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  • RMtya
    RMtya4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. Akainu has as much plot armor as Luffy. The only way Sengoju and the moral justice faction of the marines can argue to the Five elders that Akainu is the threat is by bringing up his unpredictability. He is as likely to kill a pirate, a marine, a civilian, a CP agent or a celestial dragon. Also Sengoku can tell the Elders that an admiral who waste time trying to kill one of his one subordinates (Coby)instead of going after pirates is not fit to be fleet Admiral.

    Ch 209 Unexpected Surprise
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    One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!
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  • RMtya
    RMtya6mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the clarification! Please don't drop the story!

    Ch 125 okay listen...
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    Genshin Impact: Spreading Anime Culture Across Teyvat
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  • RMtya
    RMtya6mth
    Commented

    Don't drop the story. Continue but don't bring anymore summoned characters. Just focus on the Manga, games and the adventure in Teyvat

    Ch 124 consider dropping this.
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    Genshin Impact: Spreading Anime Culture Across Teyvat
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  • RMtya
    RMtya7mth
    Commented

    That's the Warp-Warp fruit? It's the future Devil fruit of Van Augur of the Blackbeard Pirates. It means that if the Mc manage to defeat Enel and go down to the blue sea, Teach and his crew will hunt him down for his powers once he reveal himself to the world. Teach handpicked the power for his crew, giving them power matching them(Burgess has the strength fruit, Augur the Warp fruit, Doc Q the sick sick fruit, Shiryu the clear clear fruit, Vasco shot the alcohol fruit...)

    Ch 7 (07) Devil fruit
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  • RMtya
    RMtya10mth
    Replied to UltimateSenpai

    Thanks.I think it would be the best solution to spread Manga across Teyvat. The Weekly Shonen Jump's subscription + ad revenue would allow Ryuhei to open his own publishing company and later own his own animation studio. Just some ideas, if you've not already decided what to do with the story feel free to take some inspiration

    Ch 43 43. A Task To Sell His Novel
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  • RMtya
    RMtya10mth
    Commented

    Nice! I like your work and hope you'll continue writing! Just an idea: what if the Mc publish something like the Weekly Shonen Jump from Japan. A weekly chapter from each of his manga, maybe some manga by new artist from Teyvat(original manga not from our world), ad for business (restaurant, funeral parlor, tea house...). Ryuhei could make a lot of profit from the subscriptions. And he could still sell the complete manga volumes, one every 3-4 months

    Ch 43 43. A Task To Sell His Novel
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    Genshin Impact: Spreading Anime Culture Across Teyvat
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  • RMtya
    RMtya10mth
    Commented

    Make the lightsaber lore-accurate, they should be able to cut through virtually any material. There should be more dismemberments and property damage with laser sword cutting through everything not some scratch marks

    Ch 345 A/N;
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    Nice! If you give a system don't make him OP too fast. The story start becoming bland when, not if, the MC solve everything without effort. Just give him a system that show him his stats. And please just one devil fruit and don't remove the weaknesses. Sorry I'm ranting, but your story seems great, so don't become a generic system-wish fulfilling-harem-100 devil fruits-Gary stu fic. And for the love of God don't make the system some king of summoning system, to bring object or people into the world. The Mc wants to live freely, if his own family, other pirates, marines, IMU and the world government start chasing him his whole life because of his powers(because even devil fruits can't explain everything)

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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    No harem

    Ch 10 Not a chapter.
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Replied to Negan_5785

    Thanks. In which chapter?

    Ch 109 Dressrosa
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    Who's Emma again?

    Ch 109 Dressrosa
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    Your exams are going to last long, since the original author didn't publish any new chapter in a year, so nothing more for you to steal

    Ch 6 Announcement
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Replied to RMtya

    Well some of it I couldn't put the entire chapter in the comments. I bet that the "author" won't post anything after chapter 7, and if they do, everyone will see a noticeable drop in quality

    Ch 1 Drop Zone
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    Here is chapter 6 from fanfiction.net : Chapter 6: Team building and trust It's been two days since our first mission in Santa Prisca. I've been busy making more of my suits, already designing the Mark 46 armor, and interacting with my team more. Since I left a message for the Light on the threat that I would shut them down, I've been doing everything I can to help this team for when we face them and other threats. I've been thinking about changing the teams original name of Young Justice. Though I'm not sure if I should. Anyway, I've also been designing suits for my team but I need more information on their powers before I can finish them. It's possible that they are only scratching the surface with their abilities and they need to only to learn their full potential. The Light will definitely be more focused on me than the others since I know who they are and what they are trying to do. I really do admire their goal for human evolution but there is too much risk. Too many lives to be sacrificed. That is why they need to be stopped. Pretty soon, Superboy will have another confrontation with Superman and I think it's time I give him the self confidence he needs when he does. I see Superboy watching television in the main hall of the mountain. He's watching the news about Superman saving civilians from a burning building in Metropolis and putting the fire out with his Artic Breath. I really don't think it's fair that this guy has so many powers. He's practically a god. Too much power for one person to have. Jesus I sound like Bruce. I see Superboy's face that shows a mixture sadness and anger. I walk up to him "Hey Superboy, you doing ok?" I ask He looks up at me "I'm fine" he answers. He's not fine But I rather not risk going to the hospital if I told him that. "So I've been thinking of a name for you" I said to him "A name?" Superboy asks "Yeah a name. We all have one except for you and I can tell that it's been bothering you not having an identity you could call your own." I explained to him. He nods in understanding but is more depressed about being reminded that he's a clone. "So what name did you think of?" He asks me with a curious gaze. I grin "Well I was thinking of Connor as your human name and I've also thought of something for your kryptonian name but I wanted to see what you thought of the former before I told you the latter." I told him. "Connor" he repeats and has a thoughtful expression. He smiles at this "Yeah I like that but what do you mean about a Kryptonian name?" He asks "Superman's real name is Kal-El, but when he is not in uniform he is Clark Kent, journalist for the Daily Planet. Don't tell anyone though" Connor nods his head "I was thinking of Kon-El with a K. Its the only thing I could think of that could fit. You are half kryptonian and deserve to have a name to prove your heritage." "What do you mean half-kryptonian?" He asks me "I'm his clone shouldn't I be a full kryptonian?" I debate on telling him anymore for I'm not sure how he would handle the truth. Just imagine believing that you are one thing your entire life and then be told one day that you were something else entirely. It could be devastating to someone. "Are you sure you want to know?" I ask him and he looks at me with determination "I do" he said to me. I nod my head reluctantly and tell him what I know. I take out my phone and show a screen of information as I talk. "Ever since we helped you escape Cadmus, the files regarding your creation were heavily encrypted. It took me and Friday a while to decrypt them piece by piece. When we were able to decrypt them, we noticed that there were numerous files suggesting you were not the only clone they made. In fact, you are most likely the one successful clone they had at Cadmus while the rest died or were sent somewhere else for further experimentation." He looks at me with shock but let's me continue "According to the files, you certainly do have Superman's

    Ch 1 Drop Zone
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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Posted

    Don't read it. The author stole this from fanfiction.net. The fic name is "Iron Life", it's a Young Justice fic with 7 chapters a'd it's not been updated in a year. If this is the original author put a disclaimer, if not, at least change some things, you've just copy-pasted everything

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  • RMtya
    RMtya11mth
    Commented

    It's Dazzler! The mutant pop star!

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  • RMtya
    RMtya1yr
    Commented

    Nice. That girl is Furoufushi Saitou, the first captain of squad 6. That means that the Mc is going to take her place? No squad 6 is for the kuchiki clan, so I wonder which squad he will lead?

    Ch 2 Enemy!?
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  • RMtya
    RMtya1yr
    Commented

    The concept is the same but it's a completely different story

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    DC: Etherion
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  • RMtya
    RMtya1yr
    Replied to DaoistMLl6CH

    I think Fallen Angel works.Tsurugi's kenshin has a move called Lost Angel in Go, but let's hear other ideas and the author will chose

    Ch 30 Returning Home
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